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hottielibrarian

Come On In

Apr 20, 2009 22:50

Erica was changing back into her street clothes in the locker room after another soul-crushing, alienating day. She was beyond tired, near-catatonic in her drowsiness. Her body just wanted to fall into a bed, preferably with a Callie in it. Her frustration with everyone around her wearied her until she couldn't even be angry anymore.

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jay00789 April 22 2009, 23:15:51 UTC

Love it! Absolutley love it! Great job!

hottielibrarian April 23 2009, 01:40:26 UTC

Oh, awesome! Thank you for reading! I can't stop watching that icon of yours!!

reddirtgirl April 22 2009, 23:26:12 UTC

Oh yes! I have to say I love "grovelling for forgiveness" Callie, this challenge is awesome. But the ending, what a fantabulous ending (I'm all about the mushiness you must know, lol). I love this :)

Sweet happy Callica *sigh*

hottielibrarian April 23 2009, 01:42:19 UTC

I'm addicted to mushiness. Callie should have groveled for forgiveness, she had a lot to be sorry for. Thanks for reading and letting me know what you think!

mean_manic April 22 2009, 23:32:06 UTC

Incredible! As Always!

I love your writing! And your Erica is like real Erica. :D

Thank you for this story! :D

hottielibrarian April 23 2009, 01:43:26 UTC

Cool, thanks! I always regretted that we didn't get to see the real Erica on the show, so I like making her a more realized character. I'm glad you like her! Thanks for reading!

ilovecsr April 22 2009, 23:37:34 UTC

Aww, you fixed it! Why couldn't this have been the way it went? I mean, really, why not? *mumbles* stupid ABC.

I really enjoyed this. It was heartbreaking and beautiful and then you made it all okay! Really okay, not fake okay. I was actually terrified that Erica wasn't going to be there at the end, that she'd left, but then she was and it was just... *sigh*

This was wonderful. Thank you!

hottielibrarian April 23 2009, 01:46:18 UTC

I agree, why couldn't it have been this way on the show? Maybe Shonda was planning this all along, she just took too long to get there and ABC killed it. I still hate ABC.

Wow, I'm sorry I made you think Erica wouldn't be there. That was never a possibility for me--she'd never leave Callie.

Thanks for reading and letting me know what you think. I appreciate it, especially because I love your work so much!

one_escape April 23 2009, 00:00:42 UTC

I liked this so much. I loved Erica telling Callie that she wasn't okay with her betrayal and Callie basically begging for forgiveness. For a moment I thought you were going to break them up for good. :)

hottielibrarian April 23 2009, 01:47:33 UTC

No! I would never break them up for good! Never. I never believed that Erica was okay with Callie's cheating and Callie should have begged for forgiveness. Thanks so much for reading and leaving such kind feedback!