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hottielibrarian

Because I Wanted To (part 2)

Mar 04, 2009 15:05

Callie clasped Erica's hand to chivalrously and stealthily lead her out of Joe's, dodging and darting through the dense crowd, purposefully avoiding eye contact with anyone to ensure a clean and speedy getaway. Once they hit the safety of the parking lot, Callie gleefully swung Erica out to her side. Callie freed Erica's hand, only to wrap her ( Read more... )

callica fic

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vinjii March 5 2009, 00:04:21 UTC

What car? LOL. Awesome, I love how she's like not even remembering she's got a car, or that cars even exist, or that anything exists at all, besides Erica. Hee! Happy.

I want to admire Erica's ass, while she's getting into my car. Sigh.

Oh my God. Callie doing the favourite thing ever, rambling. Total rambling. Awesome! I love how she's like, her car got stolen and someone ate McFood with it, mwah, awesome. It made me giggle like this insane person I am.

Callie using the term of endearment was making my stomach flutter. Awwwww.

Rocking car. Mwah. I love how Erica is freaking out and Callie is trying to calm her.

That was all kinds of awesome!

hottielibrarian March 5 2009, 02:55:00 UTC

Wow! Thank you so much for such a detailed, sweet comment! I love hearing what stuck out! Rambling Callie is my absolute favorite and I know I'd be staring at Erica's ass if she was getting into my car. Thank you so much for reading and being so supportive!

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hottielibrarian March 5 2009, 02:55:29 UTC

Yeah,car lovin' is the best. Thanks for reading!

reddirtgirl March 5 2009, 00:20:01 UTC

Lmao, that was awesome :D The thought of them getting caught would have been just hilarious and insanely hot! As if it wasn't enough :)

Love this :D

hottielibrarian March 5 2009, 02:56:40 UTC

Cool! I think just the threat of getting caught makes what they're doing even hotter. Thanks for reading and being so sweet!

hot_4_hahn March 5 2009, 01:36:24 UTC

God that was amazing and hot. I love how they're so passionate. And it's so cute, how Erica freaks out - almost like a teenager worried about getting caught by their parents, or something. ~Adorable~

Your writing is incredible. I can't thank you enough.

hottielibrarian March 5 2009, 02:59:57 UTC

Wow, thanks. I was a little nervous writing this, so I'm relieved to hear their passion came across. And I love Erica being the one freaking out, not Callie.
Thanks for your feedback--I always wait to hear what you think.

iheartsarar March 5 2009, 01:49:11 UTC

wow! hot hot hot!

hottielibrarian March 5 2009, 03:00:19 UTC

Cool! Thanks!!