bash me?

[hotfruits]

"Okay, in this post, you can bash me all you want. Okay, wrong. What I mean is that, if you have time and you have been able to read my fics, please provide me with criticisms, constructive or not. I just feel like wanting to know how you look at how I write. I mean, don’t give me comments like OMG I like how you write or stuff like that. Okay?

Comments

[crazy_otaku911]

I love, love, love your writing. ♥

Sometimes I think you're a bit too afraid to write what you really want to write? o: That's just something I get when I talk to you. Also, you can, at times, go a bit overboard on the cheese and fluff, sometimes I think you'd do well with something more well rounded, genre wise?

That being said, I love your fics. They're always fun and creative (Unless it's angst or sad stuff, but you're good with that stuff too. ♥♥♥) It's always a highlight when you email me or post something new. ♥

Keep on writing, write what you want and love, and *CHU*

[hotfruits]

i know ~_~
and lolol in my (poor) defense, the fluffs i write are usually for other people who are like, "FLUFFY FLUFF FLUFF PLS" soooo yeah XD

well rounded?

(lol its soooo hard to be creative with angst) awe thank you yuuyan ♥

[lovemeiru]

OMG I like how you write

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...lmfao /gets shot
sorry, i'll give you something better and constructive once my stomach stops murdering me slowly o/

[hotfruits]

oh no D:
i hope your stomach feels better!

[littlemelonblue]

/shall write this when my back isn't killing me.

[hotfruits]

/huggles ♥

[littlemelonblue]

Finally got to do this @__@

Okay, so...I love your writing.
And like other people, I think they're a little short cause you know how much I love long fics :D
Um, yeah, sometimes I don't understand some stuff but that's just me cause I'm a /noob/ n_n

Other than that, they're awesome ♥ Don't stop bb~

[hotfruits]

speaking of long fics, what was that quote for the hikamada?
i forgot to write it down ~_~