[fic] on standing next to faded shadows

[tsuyonshi]

title: on standing next to faded shadows
rating: pg-13
pairing: subaru/yasu
summary: au.  when i first saw shibutani subaru - in the three-dimensional, flesh-and-blood world -, he was sitting in a café, reading a murakami haruki novel and chain-smoking with a half-empty cup of coffee sitting next to his ashtray.
word count: 8,938

Comments

[epunx99]

so good

[tsuyonshi]

thank you ♥
and honestly, i've thought about a sequel and got good ideas for it, but i don't think i'm gonna write it -- something tells me that i should leave it like it was first intended to be. sorry D:

heuu,,,,,,,

[xnice_vibex]

“You know,” I spoke up randomly, “when I was a kid and my sister started dating, I kept hearing her and my mom say that kissing a guy who smoked was like rolling your tongue around in an ashtray."

just imagine it..

i smoked too.. (laughs)

it's totally guren.

iz like just knock the woods. what the noise it makes?
i mean hopeless.

i like yasuba doing in the end.

hoo i remembered some words from traffic inline

"all your journey in highway must be go on.. if you want to go back,, just keep in mind .because it start to hurt another"..

woaa highway.. ride a car.
just tell to the stories.

-it must be happy if you're stop in the park and see more beautifull flowers goin to cheer you up-

what he heck,, i lose it for the story (laughs)

Re: heuu,,,,,,,

[tsuyonshi]

i don't have much time to reply, but thank you for the long comment ♥

[un_desdem0n_a]

WAIT. HELLO. :D

I am in a coffeshop right now and smiling for no reason. AND I AM ALONE I must look crazy

Such pretty writings and pretty characters. And Subassan ♥♥

And a very weird cameo of OhYass. Very very carefree Tatsu. ^^

And yay for Crows Zero camoes. LOL. I'd always thought it was Genji and Serizawa, though. Meh.

[tsuyonshi]

O HAY. :DD
askjfskjfdh the coincidence hahaha *____* that coffee shop was totally the central point of the story, lmao!
fklsgfdkhfd thank you, although i don't think i deserve too much credit since subassan just write themselves ♥
i couldn't help ohkura's bit ^^U

i totally thought it was serizawa/tokio because omg the way serizawa looks at him. although genji/serizawa was a bit more obvious in CZII ;D

[elyndys]

Can't tell you how thrilled I was to see 9000 words of Yasuba on my friends list!! *___* I loved how you wrote their relationship so much - right from the start it was so deep and so strong, you wrote Yasu's feelings so vividly. It was nice to see something from Yasu's POV too, I feel like you showed a bit of a different side to him and I liked it a lot. :] Thank you so much for sharing! I can only beg you to write more of them in future! ♥

[tsuyonshi]

GOOD, i thought it would scare people away *____*
and you have no idea how happy your comment makes me srsly, thank you so so much ♥

[xwickedxlovex]

I really liked it. Thank you~! :D

[tsuyonshi]

thanks to you bb ;D ♥