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tsuyonshi in hoshiradio

[FIC] tales from another broken home

Jul 13, 2009 23:44

title: tales from another broken home
rating: pg
pairing: eito gen featuring news; hinted subaru/yasu, ohkura/yasu, yoko/hina, ryo/tego, eito/uchi
summary: au in which eito have superpowers
word count: 1,897
comments: inspired by a fic i wanted to write, but gave up on. so i wrote a series of vignettes in this au. eito-only/news-only fans will hate ( Read more... )

p: gen, fandom: johnny's, r: pg, #series: i can walk on water, t: au

Comments 10

epicwaters July 14 2009, 06:58:50 UTC

It makes me sad that you gave up on it. D: I liked it!
It was a little hard to follow sometimes because there were a bunch of 'he's' and 'his'. It was still enjoyable.
I didn't recognize they were numbered (and out of order) until I was halfway through. So after reading it the first time I read it again in sequence. Both ways were fun to read :D It makes me hope for more XD how did Uchi lose his powers? Why are they fighting each other? How did they get together, the groups.
“They need us more than anything right now, whether or not you can see it.”
I like that line. ^^ Hina's story was so sad. It would be heart breaking to find that out and to worry alone, not to have anyone to relate to.

Thank you for sharing!

tsuyonshi July 14 2009, 14:23:46 UTC

Haha, well at first it was completely different from this fic, the only parts that were in the original idea are oo6 and oo7.
Tbh, I'm really out of practice with 3rd person POV so it was really hard to write *___*
About Uchi's powers and the rest...well, maybe that'll be explained later on? ;D Seriously, I loved writing this verse so I might pick it up in a while.
Hina's story must be one of my faves in this. In my mind he's this kind of incredibly gentle, responsible guy who doesn't want people to worry, so he carries everything on his shoulders - that was definitely the foundation I based his sequence on.

I'm really, really glad you liked it ♥

kynseidk July 14 2009, 07:13:52 UTC

well i love you and your universe. :)

tsuyonshi July 14 2009, 14:24:43 UTC

Well thank you very much :) ♥

minawasaiyuri July 14 2009, 17:21:06 UTC

I agree that you shouldn't give up on it. :)
It left me a little curious.
Plus, Hina is totally not my favourite so my heart totally didn't break when I read 002. XD
I liked it. :D

tsuyonshi July 14 2009, 17:30:53 UTC

Maybe I won't after all hmmm :)
Do I sense a little bit of sarcasm concerning Hina? XD
I'm glad you liked it ♥

minawasaiyuri July 15 2009, 22:52:38 UTC

D:
Oh no, it looks as though I got caught out. XD
I suppose it's not really complete sarcasm, as Hina isn't my only favourite, but yeah...it is kinda hard to chose only 1 from a group of guys like that. :D
:)

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tsuyonshi October 19 2009, 10:27:09 UTC

MY BRAIN DDDDD8 IDEK WHAT HAPPENED THERE. i used to write it a lot and it resurfaced ;A;

RYOUCHI IS SUBTLE OKAY >_>
BEST COMMENT EVER. thank you! ♥♥

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tsuyonshi October 19 2009, 19:08:49 UTC

LOLOL OKAY.

I THOUGHT IT WAS AWESOME TOO BUT JUDGING FROM THE NUMBER OF COMMENTS, PEOPLE DIDN'T DDDDDDDX gerigfkjthe and the eito rangers are very satisfying to me BUT STILL.

YES YES IT IS FRAN MR AWESOMESAUCE. and and djfsgkjgdh BEL ♥ i love bel/fran okay sdjkfgjkfg i think we should be friends ♥

late...very late... terebi_ko November 3 2009, 13:36:56 UTC

I know I'm probably months late to be giving comments, but I just have to do it.
I think this fic is awesome. It's down right original, and the story breaks my heart!! Even thought reading the summary, I thought it would be a crack fic, I feel glad I read this. You should continue it! Cause I'm sure lots of people would read it^^