Comments | hoshiradio: [drabble] only enemies speak the truth, jaejoong/changmin

tsuyonshi in hoshiradio

[drabble] only enemies speak the truth, jaejoong/changmin

Oct 15, 2011 21:59

only enemies speak the truth
rating: pg-13 for supernatural elements and a dirty word.
pairing: jaejoong/changmin
summary: au. even through venomous meetings and the mask of hate, they're each other's favourite monster.
word count: 808
comments: this originally came from a three-sentence fic prompt i got from a kind soul on tumblr whom i refer to in my ( Read more... )

#drabble, p: kim jaejoong/shim changmin, fandom: dong bang shin ki, t: au, r: pg-13

Comments 22

darkcupcakes October 16 2011, 03:04:08 UTC

I know I already told you what I thought about this which was pretty much a bunch of keysmashing, but seriously, it blows my mind to see how you were able to say so much in so little words! It's short, and to the point, but you still get to learn so much about the characters and it's SO PERFECT.

And I love evil Min. And Jaejae in denial.

This story just had all the elements needed to make me love it.

tsuyonshi November 4 2011, 23:03:48 UTC

i love writing denial. o ya.

i laff you ♥

whatifgirl86 October 16 2011, 05:19:05 UTC

Oh this was good. Definitely liked this drabble. Liked the concept of Changmin not being able to touch Jaejoong, yet both of them want to so it just makes it more desirable(touching). I didn't want it to finish but at the same time the length was good in the sense that it somewhat gives an ending, I don't know if I'm making any sense^_^ Anyway I really liked this:)

tsuyonshi November 4 2011, 23:04:56 UTC

i'm particularly proud of the whole concept around jaejoong, and i'm glad the length was suitable for the effect i was going for :)
thank you! ♥

onewsouffle October 16 2011, 08:47:19 UTC

That was probably some of the sexiest foreplay I've ever read. Bravo.

tsuyonshi November 4 2011, 23:05:27 UTC

ekgmsalkgmasgdk that makes me ridic happy. thank you ♥

zelshamada October 16 2011, 19:33:07 UTC

Oh, I love biology --Such a good line, right there. I love the way he said everything here!

This fic is really good! I loved it. I didn't see comming Jaejoong's DNA but really, such a good torture for Min. And I love who Jaejoong keeps imaginating a human!Min, just the way he is. I can't tell how much I like it.

This is so going to my favs! ^^ Thanks for it.

tsuyonshi November 4 2011, 23:06:28 UTC

well, i have a thing for torturing my characters :')
your comment makes me so happy, thank you! ♥

emda October 16 2011, 23:19:16 UTC

This is really good!!!!!!!
I always like the hate/love relationship they have!

tsuyonshi November 4 2011, 23:07:06 UTC

i love that their relationship has depth, it makes them really fun to write *__*
thank you for your comment! ♥