[Fanfic] And All That Jazz 14/?

[hoshiko2]

Title: And All That Jazz
Pairings: Alfred (US)/ Arthur (UK)
Characters: America and England
Rating: M
Warnings: Sex
Summary: Alfred is approached by the Student Body President, Arthur, for help on his math exam. They hate each other, but maybe opposites can attract with the help of something unexpected.

Comments

[thisiskanta]

... ummm... that ending... wow. I didn't really expect Alfred's point of view. I had to re-read the beginning to put the pieces together.

... I don't think I like the hunch I have for Al's big secret...

[hoshiko2]

I'm half tempted to have you tell me in texts and half tempted to make you stew.

Ah yeah, I tried to make it as obvious as quickly as possible that it had changed to Al's POV. Sorry. ^^U

[kasumicc]

fgaskfkasfkfa pair of idiotic boys, they drive me insane and they break my heart with their uncertainness >.< I guess I have to get prepared for the trainwreck ;O;

[hoshiko2]

Lol! That's part of their charm though, right?

[hetalia17]

My heart kind of sank when Alfred started screaming for Arthur to let his hands go...if this is going where I think it is...my heart just sank to my stomach. ;__;

Also...that damned cell phone!

[hoshiko2]

That's the second guess of that with Alfred. :/

[chiisana00]

I'm scared x___x

[lovelycudy]

I really like it when stories handle the fact that one of the parts is leaving for college, something that always changes things.

One thing I spotted, though: you mentioned Arthur hitting Alfred's G-Spot, but only women have them. I guess you meant his prostate?

[hoshiko2]

Har hat, shows you how much I know of the human body. I'll go back and fix it on my lunch. oRZ|||

[lovelycudy]

It's cool! :D