[Fanfic] And All That Jazz 8/?

[hoshiko2]

Title: And All That Jazz
Pairings: Alfred (US)/ Arthur (UK)
Characters: America and England with special appearance of Scotland, Wales, and Northern Ireland
Rating: M
Warnings: Delicious UST and a crying England
Summary: Alfred is approached by the Student Body President, Arthur, for help on his math exam. They hate each other, but maybe

Comments

[happygurl26]

Aww that was so sweet!
I really can't believe Arthur just did that.
Playing a song for Alfred ;D
ArthurCriesalot,doesn'the?

And Happy new years to you too!

[hoshiko2]

He's only cried once. Haha, but he does in general, yes.

[thisiskanta]

oh my LOL. I was tearing up through the graduation section because it was just so sad (and dramatic). D: once I got to the yummy piano sex part, it was quite hilarious. XDD omg really francis?! HE WOULD DO THAT. LOLOL. Ruined the mood pffft. and then really alfred? student council room? he would. tsktsk. I couldn't help but to feel that this chapter was a lot lighter (yay!) despite the angstness of the beginning. even arthur's brothers were hilarious XDD

[hoshiko2]

There's been a lot of angst lately and it's taking away from my main point of the series, so I'm lightening it up. Helps that all that drama is behind me so I feel less inclined to write any. It'll be silly from here on out for awhile. :3
And you told me you wanted Francis to walk in on them at some point, so here you go. Lol

[lovelycudy]

Arthur is very brave indeed. And I loved Francis' perving.

I liked how you managed Arthur's family, including his father being proud of him. Awesome job.

[hoshiko2]

Thanks! Francis perving is pretty much a must in USUK fics. Lol

[ladedanixie]

I pratically squealed in delight when I saw you had updated. However,before the squeal escaped my thorat I realized that my mother was in deep slumber in the next room. As a result the squeal came out as a squeak as I swallowed the rest down choking slightly. Um... ^_^; just to sum up my excitment. heh heh.
Poor Arthur, he has to leave his dear Alfred. I felt myself tearing up as I read. Don't worry Arthur, Alfie is just an hour away.
Also, not to be a grammer nazi but in this sentence: Now he knew an erogenous area of me... isn't it mine? Gomen just had to ask.
Awesome chap as always. Looking forward to the next chap
hugs and kisses, nixie :)

[hoshiko2]

GAH! Thank you fellow Grammar Nazi! I hate having anything be wrong. I'll go back and fix it up. :3

[iggyxalfie]

mooaaarrrrrrrr
mooaaarrrr
HOSHI HAPPY NEW YEAR!
ILU <33333333

[hoshiko2]

WAIT TILL AFTER THE NEW YEAR! Then you'll get one. :3