[Fanfic] And All That Jazz 7/?

[hoshiko2]

Title: And All That Jazz
Pairings: Alfred (US)/ Arthur (UK)
Characters: America and England with special appearance of Taiwan
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Delicious UST and a crying America
Summary: Alfred is approached by the Student Body President, Arthur, for help on his math exam. They hate each other, but maybe opposites can attract with

Comments

[kasumicc]

Wow, this is so heartbreaking indeed o.o
I really feel terrible for Alfred, but I also honestly thing Arthur's being too lenient to Alfred and...I just don't want for him to end hurt ): Well, neither of them. But Alfred really worries me >>

Anyways, this was another brilliant chapter. I can't wait to see what comes next for the boys! ;O;

[hoshiko2]

Al isn't the one to be worried about, actually. :3
And Arthur is scared. Of course he's lenient.

[lovelycudy]

I must admit that Alfred is kind of scary with his mood changes and his violence. I do hope Arthur helps him with that.

Great chapter and I like how you are developing Alfred's home life.

[hoshiko2]

Well Arthur is learning that he can be of help to Alfred, though he might not think so, what with Alfred lying. Thank you for your review.

[lovelycudy]

I thought so. I think you are doing a great job by showing the care this issue requires.

[hoshiko2]

Thanks so much. I worry it's not realistic or I'm not doing this type of issue enough justice. I have friends that have gone through this problem, so I don't want to disrespect them.

[medev]

so nice to see another side of Al, he is just to lovely. and Arthur to xD