Darkness: Chapter 11

Oct 27, 2010 11:58

Title: The Darkness Within Me
Characters: France and an OC
Rating: PG13 for violence
Summary: Viva La France! But which one?

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ladykidasuki October 27 2010, 19:17:32 UTC
O_O Seriously, I thought a certain other demon child was bad, but France's is NUTS. I'm loving your whole idea of what a nation is, with the ideals and the voices of the people surrounding them. It just fascinating how you write it. And I gotta admit, I liked France in this. He's not overly "lovey" and has that kind of nonchalant attitude, which fits him considering how chaotic his history has been.

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hoshiko2 October 27 2010, 22:56:37 UTC
Well, I tried to keep how France is in the canon the same, but I'm also basing him off of present day attitudes. You remember our French friends from Japan. They were awfully chill, save for finals and then they were really serious. But even then, it didn't even compare to Japanese stress levels, haha.

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ladykidasuki October 28 2010, 00:30:37 UTC
YES! Was it sad that I was thinking of a certain Frenchie when I read France half the time? You did well conveying their spirit. :)

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hoshiko2 October 28 2010, 00:50:51 UTC
I hope so. I miss that Frenchman. It doesn't help that Dani plays his videos so we all share stories about him and crack up, remembering his crazy antics, especially when he would get naked. XD

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