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Just For One Day Part 1 of 4 or 5 (Evil League of Evil, PG)

Jul 23, 2008 21:56

Title: Just For One Day (Part 1 of 4 or 5).
Author: speakr2customrs
Characters: the entire Evil League of Evil, several henchmen including Moist, Johnny Snow.
Pairing: none yet, might be Tie-Die/Johnny Snow in Part 3 - if she’s still alive then!
Rating: PG so far, will rise to R later.
Word Count: 1,900Inspired by a comment made in this community by my Evil Twin ( Read more... )

length: multi-part, author: speakr2customrs, chara: evil league of evil, chara: dr. horrible

Comments 4

spaciireth July 24 2008, 04:01:18 UTC

Heee! I saw the comments in the other entry and was looking forward to seeing what you came up with. I especially love Bad Horse's various whinnies. When I discovered the name 'Bad Horse' wasn't a metaphor, I was a little intrigued as to how he ran the ELE. Looking forward to Part 2!

speakr2customrs July 24 2008, 09:53:37 UTC

Thank you!

lily22 July 24 2008, 04:04:54 UTC

Hahaha this is AWESOME! I love how you write the Evil League of Evil - it's all speculation, so I'm amazed at how well it all fits. I've always wondered how Bad Horse could lead without, you know, human speech, but his Whinnies of ______ and his very expressive body language totally make sense.

You flesh out the characters so well from what little we were given. I love the idea that Prof Normal (you wrote Professor Hourglass once, btw) would feel threatened by Doc Horrible, but polymath!Fake Jefferson was brilliance!!

Can't wait how they deal with the nasties, and I wonder if the actual heroes will be any use at all!

speakr2customrs July 24 2008, 10:13:27 UTC

Thank you! I've corrected the 'Professor Hourglass' mistake - you seem to have been the only person who noticed it, either here or on my own Journal.

I've written outline origin stories for the entire League - they probably won't appear in the story, although Tie-Die's may do, but they help me keep the characters consistent. Fake Thomas Jefferson really has to be a genius - I'm thinking of President Kennedy's comment, when he hosted a dinner at the White House for a bunch of Nobel Prize winners, that it was the greatest assembly of talent the building had seen since Thomas Jefferson dined alone. Although Fake Thomas Jefferson might be faking it!