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Hidden Intentions (Part 4/?)

Jul 26, 2008 22:01

Title: Hidden Intentions (Part 4/?)
Author: hoperoy
Fandom: Smallville
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Clark/Lex,
Word count: 3,429
Warnings: Dubious seduction, vague spoilers for "Justice," and mpreg.
Summary: After a failed mission for the fledgling Justice League, Clark finds himself completely at Lex's mercy. When Clark begins to feel sick, Lex's real ( Read more... )

hidden intentions, sv fiction

Comments 42

bradygirl_12 July 27 2008, 02:39:55 UTC

Eep! I hope that Oliver is being influenced by drugs or something. This is really cold and cruel!

I do love that in the SV world, somehow Clark and Lex always end up following the other around. ;)

hoperoy July 29 2008, 01:41:38 UTC

Yeah, Oliver is being influenced by drugs. That accounts for his hostility towards Clark. Unfortunately, his dislike of Lex is deeper than that.

Ooo! astrea9562 July 27 2008, 02:55:29 UTC

Excellent work!

I am so *not* an Ollie fan in SV's version of Supes, so this chapter went down very well with me. *eg*

*waits patiently for more*

Clark will be thinking long and hard now I can see.

*Hugs*

Re: Ooo! hoperoy July 29 2008, 01:43:06 UTC

I don't hate the character of Oliver--I just think he's a cheap replacement for the Lex of the early seasons. You know, rich guy, morally ambiguous, likes Clark, etc.

Clark will be thinking long and hard now I can see.

Clark has a lot of thinking to do.

jakekero July 27 2008, 03:15:52 UTC

Fantastic! Sorry I haven't commented on the other chapters but I am really enjoying this whole story and eagerly waiting each new chapter.

Glad Lex jumped in when he did. Oliver totally crossed the line. I hope Clark will get his powers back at some point so Oliver would break his hand taking a pot shot at him like that.

hoperoy July 29 2008, 01:43:56 UTC

Glad Lex jumped in when he did. Oliver totally crossed the line. I hope Clark will get his powers back at some point so Oliver would break his hand taking a pot shot at him like that.

Lex has a vested interest in keeping Clark safe, but even if he didn't, I'd like to think that he'd still defend him. :)

legendarytobes July 27 2008, 03:27:45 UTC

Oh Ollie, so sanctimonious and insecure about being merely human. I must say, I got a thrill out of Lex storming in. Some of Ollie's stuff is just so far over the line and I can see him doing this, expecting this of him.

Still, can't wait for Clark to figure out why he's sick!

hoperoy July 29 2008, 01:45:42 UTC

Oliver is way out of line, but we do have to cut him a little slack--Lex was drugging him, although I don't think that becomes clear until the next chapter.

Still, can't wait for Clark to figure out why he's sick!

That's coming, I think in the next chapter. Want to make a trade? The next chapter for an update of The Unexpected or OWAL? :P

rosy5000 July 27 2008, 03:59:53 UTC

I can't help but wonder if Lex 'planned' the division between Ollie and Clark by letting Clark visit with Ollie?

Though, Ollie's reaction and self-rightousness was way over the line. Is he being influenced by drugs too? I would think him seeing Clark bleed would have made him stop and think.

hoperoy July 29 2008, 01:46:43 UTC

I can't help but wonder if Lex 'planned' the division between Ollie and Clark by letting Clark visit with Ollie?

To a certain point. He didn't want Clark to get beaten up, though.

Is he being influenced by drugs too?

Yup.