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A Picture's Worth (Part 4/?)

May 02, 2008 22:19

Title: A Picture's Worth (Part 4/?)
Author: hoperoy
Fandom: Smallville
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Clark/Lex,
Word count: 3,722
Warnings: Mentions of underage sex.
Summary: Pictures don't lie, even when Clark and Lex do. It's possible that a little truth is exactly what they need-even if it turns their lives upside down.
Author's Note: This takes place after ( Read more... )

a picture's worth, sv fiction

Comments 35

phoenix_run May 3 2008, 02:57:29 UTC

I haven't been able to write about the previous chapters but this has the makings of another wonderful story. It's nice to see Clark is admitting to himself he might still be in lust with Lex, instead of just hiding behind his anger with him.
Also, the end of this chapter was just plain hot. I really do get a thrill when Lex bites Clark and Clark gets really revved up.

hoperoy May 3 2008, 17:17:09 UTC

That's one of the things I like, too. Clark is invulnerable, but it's still kind of hot to have Lex biting him.

twinsarein May 3 2008, 03:07:29 UTC

Ohh, I know a blackmailer who is not going to be happy with this turn of events. I, on the other hand, am very happy and hope it continues in this vein in the next chapter.

hoperoy May 3 2008, 17:17:37 UTC

Nope, this was not at all what the blackmailer expected. :)

cinderella81 May 3 2008, 03:46:40 UTC

*giggle* I bet the blackmailer wasn't counting on this!!! *g*

Another great chapter!!!!

hoperoy May 3 2008, 17:17:55 UTC

Hehe, nope, they weren't!

roxymissrose May 3 2008, 04:40:51 UTC

Ah, just when I really kind of wanted to beat Clark senseless. Why in the world would he be opposed to Lex spinning the situation to give them both a little relief--business aside? Just seems like common sense to me.

I enjoyed this update very much.
Lana...heh.

hoperoy May 3 2008, 17:20:10 UTC

When I wrote this, I wasn't exactly meaning to write Clark as not wanting Lex to spin things. The way I was seeing it, he more wanted Lex to admit--at least to him--that he'd made some bad decisions by sleeping with an underage boy. That's probably my fault if it didn't come across that way.

roxymissrose May 3 2008, 17:35:57 UTC

Oh no, I got that, it was plain that he wanted Lex to admit that. I think my interpretation of that scene came through my tendency to see everything through Lex-colored glasses.

kara2477 May 3 2008, 09:41:01 UTC

Thank you for making Lana leave. She's annoying!!!
Now I wonder what the blackmailer has in store for
are boys.

hoperoy May 3 2008, 17:20:35 UTC

Or what Lex has in store for the blackmailer. :)

kara2477 May 3 2008, 17:22:42 UTC

true i didn't think of that.