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Yesterday's Tomorrow (Part 24/25)

Aug 25, 2007 22:25

Title: Yesterday's Tomorrow
Author: hoperoy
Fandom: Smallville
Pairing: Clark/Lex, Clark/other
Rating: NC-17
Length: 5,902
Spoilers: Vessel
Warnings: Violence, non-con, character death
Disclaimer: I can only wish that they were mine. Sadly, that is not the case.
Notes: Part 24/25
Summary: Sometimes the best men don't always win, and even heroes fail. AU ( Read more... )

sv fiction, yesterday's tomorrow

Comments 23

dm_wyatt August 26 2007, 16:39:04 UTC

Totally awesome!

Poor Clark, but I loved how you described Clark's disorientation and confusion once Lex got him back "home"...

The last couple of updates hit all of my TC kink buttons, so good job.

*hugs*

I can't wait to see how Zod gets his just deserts in the end.

hoperoy August 27 2007, 02:19:47 UTC

The last couple of updates hit all of my TC kink buttons, so good job.

This story is like a list of my TC kinks. I pretty thought that if it was a TC kink then I'd work it in here somehow. :) *hugs back*

I can't wait to see how Zod gets his just deserts in the end.

Lex is angry, and angry!Lex is always someone you want to avoid. Zod would do well to realize that.

dm_wyatt August 27 2007, 13:20:06 UTC

LOL!

Well, you are a woman after my own heart... I pretty much do the same thing when it comes to TC kinks. Subject, I think, pretty much has them all.

If I've forgotten one, just let me know and I'll put it in the last section.

*grins*

I can't wait to see what angry!Lex does to Zod.

hoperoy August 27 2007, 19:39:21 UTC

Yeah, I think Subject hit most of mine. Actually, I think it would have hit every one had it been Lex tying Clark up in order to have sex with him, but, well, we can't have everything, can we? :P Is there hope for Superman For Sale? Possibly something related to the magical hold Lex has over Clark? *looks at you hopefully*

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hoperoy August 27 2007, 02:22:52 UTC

I'm really glad to hear that this was believable for you (or as believable as any fan fic can be). That's always a pretty big challenge when writing.

I love this, sad is becoming to and end

I've got more stories written and ready to go! (A couple, anyway.)

hils August 27 2007, 16:37:52 UTC

Wow, I can't believe we're so close to the end now. I've loved every minute of this fic, even the dark and painful stuff

Loved Lex looking after Clark in this chapter and I'm intrigued by Lana. I'm guessing she's going to have some part in the downfall of Zod

hoperoy August 27 2007, 19:40:31 UTC

I can't believe that it's almost done either! I was really pleased by all the comments and support from everyone.

littlehollyleaf August 28 2007, 16:43:31 UTC

Another brilliant installment :)

Beautiful description of Lex tending to Clark after Zod's abuse and interesting introspective of Lana. I do not like Lana, but your description of her mindset is easy to follow and not stupid/evil like she often comes across in the show. I'm insanely curious to see what state everyone's lives/opinions will be left in by the end!