“Like a hit list?” asked Gabriel excitedly. “Because if we’re going to whack some people then we need to get some nice suits. Maybe get a tommy gun or two?! Those things are fun!” *snickers*
It took me a little while to puzzle through the timeline here, figure out what was now and what was then - I THINK that was a vision of Michael speaking to Sam in the Stanford-era present, not the Apocalyptic future?
I'm just taking a short pit stop here to tell you how awesome this story is. Love that you put Gabe in it - he always was one of my favourites in the show and really got too little screen time :) Love your stile, too, the story flows nicely. I'm going to leave a longer comment at the end! - and on with Chap 3
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*snickers*
It took me a little while to puzzle through the timeline here, figure out what was now and what was then - I THINK that was a vision of Michael speaking to Sam in the Stanford-era present, not the Apocalyptic future?
I'm enjoying the use of quotes from the show!
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I figured quotes from the show would be best because they were just too good to pass up.
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- and on with Chap 3
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