A SS/HG flash fiction for Teaoli on her birthday.

Oct 25, 2012 14:49



The girl’s answer was correct; as always.

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teaoli October 25 2012, 20:10:46 UTC
Wow, Hopeful. That was utterly brilliant.

Two lines resonated with me so much - because the both get to the core of who I believe Severus Snape to be - I had to read them over and over and over and over again:

He hated the knowledge she would be his equal much sooner than he would have been had their roles been reversed.

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In bile-inducing-truth, if she were the teacher; proficiently able as such due to her relentless pursuit of knowledge, and Severus were the pupil; constantly thrusting his hand into the air-the answer she’d requested burning on his tongue, he probably would have been disgustingly besotted with her.

Thank you so, so, so very much for this beautiful gift.

Would you mind terribly if I shared it with others? I will not do so without your permission.

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hopefuladdict October 25 2012, 20:33:27 UTC
Yay! I am thrilled that you like your present!!!! I have typed and tweaked all morning here to get a true 'flash fiction' going for you--although my word doc says I'm right at 500 and LJ is saying I'm over by a hair. I don't mind at all if you share it with others. I'm going to post it to ff.net (practice because I haven't posted anywhere in forever and need a refresher).

And you inspired me to give the writing a go again by the way. I loved that you were prompted to 'pinch-hit" in a new fandom/ship and thoroughly enjoyed it. I need to expand and you helped me.

Happy Happy Birthday, Lovely One!!!!!

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I A Haz B-Day Pressie! livejournal October 25 2012, 20:56:10 UTC
User teaoli referenced to your post from I A Haz B-Day Pressie! saying: [...] at FanFicDotNet or at hopeful's lj as A SS/HG flash fiction for Teaoli on her birthday [...]

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Re: I A Haz B-Day Pressie! hopefuladdict October 25 2012, 21:41:19 UTC
Well this is a fair bit of awesome. I think you loving this little bit o' fic is one of the best gifts I've had in a long while.

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karelia October 25 2012, 21:12:26 UTC
Oh, good heavens! I don't even know you, and I already adore you just because of this! So, so, lovely, and so, so in character!

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W-O-W hopefuladdict October 25 2012, 21:43:28 UTC
Goodness, those are some seriously kind words. Thank you so, so much!

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linstock October 25 2012, 22:30:27 UTC
This is a HG/SS story i can believe. Snape is soooo Snape-y and Herminone is perfect. Snape self awareness, not matter how grudging, was a delight.

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hopefuladdict October 25 2012, 23:39:09 UTC
Thanks, Lin!!

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spockchick October 26 2012, 08:51:19 UTC
This was fab Hopeful, and Snape's acknowledgement that she was smarter than him was wonderful.

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hopefuladdict October 26 2012, 16:01:16 UTC
Thanks so much! I'm so glad I gave myself the treat of sitting down to write it.

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