Camera Shy (6/?)

[hope_and_heart]

Title: Camera Shy (6/?)
Pairing: Daniel Agger/Martin Skrtel
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Daniel already knows what is expected of him.
Disclaimer: Just a figment of my strange imagination and no one should get their knickers in a twist over it.

Comments

Thank you!

[missl]

:O and :D

I find myself holding my breath whenever they have conversations. It feels like they are both on the edge of a precipice and the slightest thing could either send them both hurtling in a new and exhilarating direction, or end it all. Arrrhheee!

I'm driving up to Anfield this afternoon and may blush when I see them in the flesh...

Re: Thank you!

[hope_and_heart]

Haha I feel like I write them talking whilst holding my breath if that's any consolation :') Yeah that's kind of exactly what is happening I guess, one wrong word one way or the other and boom ;)
Haha if I made you blush I'm extremely proud of that :P
Thanks babe ♥

[arden_forest]

Wow. Pretty much speechless.
And somehow their conversations are just as hot as the sex.

[hope_and_heart]

Thank you so much!
Haha I feel like their conversations are always precarious so I'm glad you like them :D
♥

[x_embrujada]

Ok, you are trying to kill me with this chapter, I wonder if you will continue to update better and better from one chapter to another, how I will survive the last one?
Usually it was sex chapter then conversation chapter and now there hot sex and really sexy and promising talk. I`m not sure what I`m trying to say, bit the point is that I love that, Sunday morning with great fic, how it can start better? Thank you!!!!

[hope_and_heart]

Haha not trying to kill you, I promise :P I hope I do, I don't know, you'll have to let me know whether I manage that or not :P
I'm really glad you liked it huni, especially because this wasn't originally what i was going to write XD
Thank you so much hun ♥

[elf_md]

Girlie, this is so good.

The way Daniel wonders, how he trusts Martin to be the one to do it. How he wants Martin to understand and how he reveals more than he wants to, but doesn't regret it when he does.

My favorite sentence: making himself his friend, because that's what I see more than anything, Martin worming his way into Daniel's life, and Daniel not standing a chance. The way it affects him when he realizes Martin isn't speaking to him, that's just beautiful.

And the hug. That was bloody brilliant. That was so amazingly intimate, even if it was out on the street and they'd just fucked. It's like, they're still taking the same steps a forming couple takes, the hug, the kiss that will be, fucking with their faces to one another, while on the other hand, they are already fucking

[hope_and_heart]

I'm glad you like it ;)
Yeah I think Daniel can't keep his mouth shut. He does want Martin to understand but I think it's got more to do with needing himself to understand and trying to order it all by speaking it... if that makes sense :P
I'm so glad you like that sentence because I feel like that is what Martin is doing more than anything. I think Daniel has been alone for so long, with all this pressure that he doesn't really remember how it goes, making friends and all that.
I'm so glad you mentioned the hug, I think it was my favourite part even if it did kill me not to have them kiss. Yeah I think even though they're already having sex they are taking all the other baby steps along with it.
I agree, I think Martin is more helpless than he lets on and he can't really help himself.
Thanks babe, your comment made me smile like an idiot :P
♥

[vicky86x]

this is brilliant! Absolutely brilliant! I can't tell you often enough how much I love this story! Cause seriously: I do! ;)

God the sex? Amazing, really hot, but still realistic, conisdering it's Dan's first time you know? He's nervous and you can sense that, but his connection to Martin makes him go through with it and obviously enjoy it as well! ;)

But my absolute favorite part is the hug and the conversation afterwards! Like elf_md said, the hug is sooooo much more intimate than the fucking! I mean physically they've been so close already, but they're taking baby steps in their emotional relationship and I love it!

How Martin becomes more and more a part of Dan's life! How they open up to each other! I never thought Dan would tell all that to Martin, but I'm also really glad that he doesn't regret it afterwards!

I still think he's going to freak out at some point, I just hope he doesn't hurt Martin too much when he does!

I can only say it again: This is absolutely brilliant stuff! I love it :D

[hope_and_heart]

Thank you so much, I can't tell you enough how happy that makes me XD
I'm glad you think it's realistic, because the nerves is what I wanted to get across. But as you said, he has a connection with Martin that is getting to be undeniable ;)
Yeah the hug. I think everyone has had that slightly awkward hug where it's just the other side of intense :P I agree, I think they hug was intimate in a way the sex wasn't.
Haha yeah Martin's kind of worming his way in, isn't he. I feel like Daniel is one of those people that says things before he really thinks about it. Maybe he's just too honest :P
Thanks babe really glad you like it :) ♥