House Of The Rising Sun (6/?)

Dec 26, 2011 14:42


Title: House Of The Rising Sun (6/?)
Pairing: Daniel Agger/Fernando Torres
Rating: NC-17
Summary: It’s been the ruin of many a poor boy and god I know I’m one.
Disclaimer: Not real.

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pairing agger/torres, daniel agger, the house of the rising sun, fernando torres

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katiebooth1983 December 26 2011, 15:58:02 UTC
Oh these two are just gorgeous. I love how unsure Fernando is about everything, Dan too.

“Danny?” Fernando asked quietly as his delicate fingers traced invisible patterns on the skin of his stomach.

“Yeah?” he asked turning his eyes down to Fernando’s bed mussed head even if the Spaniard didn’t lift his own gaze to meet him.

“Please don’t pay me for this,” he replied quietly, his voice a thin strand in the vast, high ceilinged room that was white and neutral and entirely devoured of colour.

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hope_and_heart December 27 2011, 14:26:54 UTC
Fernando is really unsure, he just doesn't have a clue what he's doing and he's probably looking to Dan to guide him now that they've made the leap. Problem is Dan has no idea what he's doing either.
Thank you so much babe <3

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tetila December 26 2011, 18:09:04 UTC
“Please don’t pay me for this,” he replied quietly, his voice a thin strand in the vast, high ceilinged room that was white and neutral and entirely devoured of colour.

Oh man, that made my heart clench painfully in my chest.

That was a really nice chapter with so many emotions and nicely described pictures :)

Thanks for writing this!

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hope_and_heart December 27 2011, 14:34:41 UTC
I know, poor Fernando. He has no idea what he's doing.
There was a lot of emotion, I think, whether they want to admit it or not, it's far too late now and even if they don't label what they are they're "involved"
Thank you for reading it :) I'm really glad you like it!

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elf_md December 26 2011, 20:40:46 UTC
Love it.

Sorry 'bout the crappy comment.

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hope_and_heart December 27 2011, 14:35:02 UTC
Thank you, I'm really glad you like it :)
<3

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hope_and_heart December 27 2011, 14:39:51 UTC
I know it's pretty long already, so thank you for taking the time to read it :)
Wow, I really appreciate that you think so and I'm so glad you like it! I'll try not to leave you waiting too long!
Thanks you so much hun ♥

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narya86 December 26 2011, 23:53:28 UTC
Oh wow, this hurts so good. The sex was beautiful and hot and touching, and when Fernando asked Dan not to pay him my heart hurt a little. I'm so sad already at the prospect of this being destroyed. :(

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hope_and_heart December 27 2011, 14:43:58 UTC
I know, I think the only word to describe what I have planned for them is "destroyed" but I warned you in the first part it wasn't pretty :P At least he's going back though :)
I'm glad you think it's touching, I think their connection is important, because it's something I don't think they have a choice over, if you know what I mean.
Thank you so much hun ♥

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narya86 December 29 2011, 19:20:20 UTC
Ouch. :-/ I'm already biting my nails apprehensively. All my hopes rest on his return though! :)

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hope_and_heart December 29 2011, 23:38:36 UTC
I know but hopefully i'll do their "journey" justice so you won't hate it too much!
Daniel would agree with you there m'dear <3

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