First Choice

[hope813]

Title: First Choice
Author: hope813
Pairing: Finn/Rachel
Rating: PG
Warnings:None
Disclaimer: Sadly, this world is not mine.
Summary: Finn and Rachel struggle to make an important choice. Plenty of love and humor. This is an angst-free zone!

***COMPLETED ONE-SHOT***

NOTE: This story is a sequel to my one-shot story, "Another First," but may be

Comments

[ellodie186]

holy finnchel this was amazing!!!!! i love the name, i actually know a girl named starr, but she has an extra R. ;) i loved this. perfectly in character, perfectly cute and fluffy and romantic and sweet. perfectly perfect.

[hope813]

Aw. Thank you so much for reviewing. I appreciate the amazing feedback!

[elimaru]

YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love this entire thing so much!!!!!! I am going to be grinning like an idiot for the rest of the night! :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D

Possibly my favorite line (although there are several, this tops most of them):
“Finn, I have never been indecisive in my entire life!”
“Me, either.”
She arched a brow at him. “Okay, fine,” he replied, admitting defeat. “Tell me what it means.”

So much win and fluff and beautifulness and...*swoon*! :)

[hope813]

Thank you! We need more Finchel goodness, damn it! I find myself unable to write serious Finchel angst, though. I think I have a mental block against going in that direction since I feel like it will be a while before we get our payoff on-screen!

I had no intention of writing this sequel. I had to take a break from the VDay fic because I got stuck, and I wrote this instead. Heh. Come to think of it, that's how I wrote my last story, too ("Another First").

[hope813]

Thank you for always reviewing! I truly appreciate it and I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[caddyeverafter7]

Awe, so cute ^^ And the name does suit her. I had no idea what I thought it would be, but it was a pleasant surprise ^^ Nice work ♥

[hope813]

Thank you! I appreciate you taking the time to review. I figured that Finn would still want something unusual and Rachel would want something that stood out and really meant something. Hence, we have Star. ; )

[anonymous]

Great job again! I really love all your fics. However there are always a least a couple of lines in each one where my enjoyment is tempered by jealousy that I didn't write them. In this one it is this exchange-

“No. Rachel, what is it you always tell me when I lose stuff?”

“To put things where they belong in the first place,” she replied tartly.

Brilliant.

Casper.

[hope813]

Thanks so much for being such a faithful reviewer. I feel like I come up with one really strong line/piece of dialogue per story that I am proud of. I'm glad I made you jealous! ; )