Another First

[hope813]

Title: Another First
Author: hope813
Pairing: Finn/Rachel
Rating: PG-13
Warnings:Through "Sectionals"
Disclaimer: Sadly, this world is not mine.
Summary: Finn reflects on his relationship with Rachel before they share a big moment together. Plenty of humor (this is Finn's point of view, after all).

***COMPLETED ONE-SHOT***

Comments

[hope813]

That was the point! I'm glad I faked you out. : )

As always, thanks for reviewing! I think that a pregnant Rachel has the potential to be a very scary Rachel! I think that easy-going Finn might be the only one who could deal with her mood-swings!

[ellodie186]

i loved it. most of the time a story with so many inner thoughts bores me because i'm a big fan of dialogue, but this i loved. i loved how you incorperated the flipcam, hahaha. cory's obsession is amazing and it's cool hwo you put that in the story. A+ great job!

[hope813]

Thank you SO much! That flip cam thing came to me at the last minute, just before I posted this. It was 100% a shout-out to Cory (glad you caught that), but I can totally see Finn being that way with the flipcam, too, in this case!

[ohliz]

This was so thoughtful and beautiful! I love the twist in the story too. :)

Amazing story.

[hope813]

Aw, thank you so much! I am glad that you enjoyed it and even happier that you took the time to comment! ; )

[ohliz]

I'm very new to the Glee community and I've been going around and adding the best sites and whatnot, and this is the first GOOD fic I've read so far. :)

By the way, do you have any recommendations for the best LiveJournal communities for Glee in general and a Finn/Rachel one?

[hope813]

Absolutely! I recommend finnrachel and finnandrachel communities on livejournal (although they have many of the same things posted

[elimaru]

There are so many amazing lines in this!! Let me begin:

The pregnancy had been very tough on Rachel. Finn was pretty sure it was because she was so emotional normally that her hormones were usually out of whack anyway. Either that, or she was having the child of Satan. They’d caught Rosemary’s Baby on cable about a month ago, and he found himself watching Rachel more closely afterward. She had started looking kind of sick and pale like that Rosemary chick and, well, carrying a demon spawn would certainly explain her mood-swings. Luckily, Rachel never craved raw meat, so he was reasonably sure that the baby was his.

They’d always had amazing sex and lots of it, but pregnant sex...just, wow! Pregnant sex was hot. Finn was pretty sure that he’d never have been able to fantasize half of the stuff that Rachel had come up with. He should have been writing it all down.
^^ Those two made me LOL!! Hee hee. Hee hee heeeeeee! xD

Also:
Rachel had argued that ten-minute long shots of her sleeping face had nothing whatsoever to do with the baby

[hope813]

YAY! I faked you out! As I wrote that first part, I kept imagining the WTF looks on readers' faces when Finn keeps asking Rachel if she's sure that she's ready, and then she says: "Finn! Do you want me to call someone else?" Haha!

I've created a monster! You're almost as greedy as I am. That Valentine's prompt will kills me, mark my words! A chapter for each of the seven days? Oy! I need some incentive...I told you I was greedy! A trade, perhaps? ; )

I am glad that you found this story so quotable. ; ) Those are all my favorite parts, too!

By the way, that's awesome about writing an original story! Just don't forget about your fellow Finchel gleeks!

[elimaru]

If it's a trade you want, then that's fine with me.......prompt away! :) (But do be patient, please...school is already busy and it's only my first day back. If I take a month, "I fully understand if you want to beat me up...if you can, just try to avoid my nose.") :B Hee hee hee.

[hope813]

Haha! I'll be nice and give you options:

1) Keeping with your Valentines Day idea, how about Finn and Rachel's first date ON Valentine's Day? Finn does not realize that they made the plans for V-Day until it's too late. I want adorably awkward Finn!

2) Finn realizes his true feelings for Rachel in an unusual way.

3) Finn tries to win Rachel back from Vocal Adrenaline's lead singer. (Jonathan Groff's upcoming character).

[hpchickadee]

Oh, this is just beautiful! I love the fake-out at the beginning, and the very last line of the story is perfect to wrap it all up.

Great job! ♥

[hope813]

Thank you so much! I really appreciate your review. I am so glad that the fake-out worked! ; )