Comments | hoosierbitch: fic: bruises [white collar, nc-17, neal/peter/elizabeth]

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fic: bruises [white collar, nc-17, neal/peter/elizabeth]

Jan 02, 2013 00:06

Title: bruises
Author: hoosierbitch
Rating: NC-17
Word count: 8,200
Pairing: Neal/Peter/Elizabeth
Content Advisory: BDSM, handcuff!kink
Beta: The amazing, incomparable, patient, and benevolent ivorysilk.
Notes: This is my advent fic for whitecollarhc, but it’s also a present for doctor_fangeek. I know it’s late, bb, but here’s a fic just for you. ♥

Summary: Neal has a handcuff kink.

( There are bruises like bracelets around Neal’s wrists. )

pairing: elizabeth/neal/peter, rating: nc-17, fandom: white collar, fic, kink: all of them, kink: bdsm, kink: bondage

Comments 19

coffeethyme4me January 2 2013, 06:51:26 UTC

Wow. Perfection.

moluren January 2 2013, 06:59:31 UTC

This is lovely! Particularly liked the details of the bedside table.

doctor_fangeek January 2 2013, 07:19:09 UTC

OMG! I am not sure I have the words, bb. You have taken that prompt and made something oh so much more of it than I ever imagined, and the result is beautiful and funny and hot, and...amazing. I love Peter and his lists, and El asking about safewords over the dish washing (and did Satchmo end up getting the pancake?), and how endearing and adorable Neal finds them.

And this:
Peter approaches it with the thoroughness of an FBI agent and Elizabeth comes at it with the organizing eye of a party planner and Neal does his best not to evade them like a conman.

And especially this:
This is what it’s supposed to feel like, he’s realizing. This is what’s supposed to be waiting for him at the end.

And I could go on.

Thank you so much, this was amazing.

dreamsofspike January 2 2013, 08:15:59 UTC

This is so epically awesome!! :) You handled the dom/sub dynamics so well, so realistic and tender and angsty and hot, and just loved this soooo much!!!

daria234 January 2 2013, 08:51:22 UTC

Love this!!

Favorite lines:

He may not be as smooth as Neal and Elizabeth are, with their hyperawareness of other peoples’ moods, so he’s learned to preface his announcements with suitable disclaimers.

Peter recognizes the cadence. Neal’s honest confessions are infrequent, but each one is burned into Peter’s memory vividly enough that he can identify each new truthful moment as Neal gives it to them.

Neal says he loves that about him. Peter hopes he isn’t lying.

The words come out of Peter’s mouth but Neal can feel them twining between his own tense fingers, teasing between his teeth and tongue.

He remembers that this is more strange for Peter than it is for Neal.

Amd just generally the beautiful level of empathy among all of them for one another.