FIC: dreams that don't come true (and some stars to wish upon) [White Collar, Neal/Peter, R]

May 30, 2011 15:38

Title: dreams that don't come true (and some stars to wish upon)
Fandom: White Collar
Rating: R
Author: hoosierbitch
Pairings: Neal/Peter
Acknowledgments: If there are any commas in the appropriate places, it is only because coffeethyme4me beat them into submission with her beta stick. afiawri provided invaluable brainstorming insight. And, as always, thanks to elrhiarhodan. SHE KNOWS WHAT ( Read more... )

kink: other, pairing: neal/peter, writing for: charities, fandom: white collar, genre: angst, fic, rating: r

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monkeyonthelam May 30 2011, 21:14:29 UTC
Tears in my eyes. I absolutely loved this fic. You did an excellent job with the end about Neal slowly realizing that he actually isn't dreaming.

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hoosierbitch June 17 2011, 16:35:32 UTC
Thank you so much, bb.

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ursula4x May 30 2011, 21:33:31 UTC
Yes! That was so beautifully written. All that pent up longing, lust, love, and it leads to a delightful conclusion.

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hoosierbitch June 17 2011, 16:35:47 UTC
Thank you so much, Urs!

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daria234 May 30 2011, 21:37:47 UTC
I love this - the whole structure of the story is just amazing, with the reality being yes and the fantasy full of no, and Peter asking if it's okay being the first sign of reality ( ... )

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hoosierbitch August 13 2011, 18:35:56 UTC
Thank you so much! I love 'favorite parts' feedback. ♥

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coffeethyme4me May 30 2011, 21:43:07 UTC
This story literally took my breath away. I ache from this, and I ache for this. I hurt for Neal, burn for him. You astound me, you’re so goddamned talented.

I felt every word of this.

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hoosierbitch August 13 2011, 18:36:12 UTC


Thank you so much, darling.

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coffeethyme4me August 13 2011, 20:36:02 UTC
You're always welcome. Richly deserved. :-)

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isabeau May 30 2011, 21:48:39 UTC
nnnnggggg oh /Neal/.

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hoosierbitch August 13 2011, 18:36:24 UTC
:-)

Thank you!

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