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FIVE AAAAAAAAAACTS! (Round 4)

May 09, 2011 11:16

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Re: Neal/Peter - Untitled Part II hoosierbitch May 12 2011, 01:34:16 UTC

THIS. IS. AWESOME. From Neal's very first reaction to the tape around his fingers, to Peter's plans - the logistics & the motivation - to Neal's desperation...

AWESOME.

Can't talk more. Gotta go reread.

*facepalm* Also: THANK YOU!

Letting Go (Merlin, Arthur/Merlin, Insecurity, Tops/Bottoms, Overwhelm-ed-ness, BDSM) 1/4 heeroluva May 12 2011, 23:17:53 UTC

Arthur trust Merlin more than he’d every trusted anyone, even his own father. He trusted him to keep him safe by whatever means possible, but despite that trust, he just couldn’t let go in the bedroom. Who would have thought that behind Merlin’s bumbling façade lurked a strong force of will that demanded obedience. It had been unexpected, but welcome. Arthur didn’t have a problem surrendering, enjoying everything Merlin did to him, even the things that scared him at first. But still he could never truly let go. He was Prince and would one day be King. There were certain expectations of him, certain qualities that had been ingrained in him from the time he was born ( ... )

Letting Go (Merlin, Arthur/Merlin, Insecurity, Tops/Bottoms, Overwhelm-ed-ness, BDSM) 2/4 heeroluva May 12 2011, 23:18:52 UTC

Two mouths suddenly fastened to his peaked nipples. For one horrified moment, Arthur thought Merlin had invited others, but feeling no movement, no dip in the bed to indicate a presence by his side, he relaxed minutely as he realized that this was magic. Merlin had never used it in the bedroom before, but if it could do this, Arthur couldn’t even begin to think of the possibilities of what Merlin could do with him now. It blew his mind, and left him shaking ( ... )

Letting Go (Merlin, Arthur/Merlin, Insecurity, Tops/Bottoms, Overwhelm-ed-ness, BDSM) 3/4 heeroluva May 12 2011, 23:19:39 UTC

Merlin held him in place though, with a deceptively strong arm wrapping tightly around him around him. When Arthur stills, one hand is suddenly in his hair, pulling back hard, and Arthur follows deliberately relaxing, letting is head lull and fall back against Merlin’s shoulder. He wants to torch so bad, but he doesn’t have permission and leaves his hands at his sides, waiting to be told.

Merlin’s hand trailed down his side much has it had at the start of this all. However, this time it wasn’t relaxing, his overstimulated body reacting to the slightest slight. The hand moves up and plucks at his nipple, and yet the mouth doesn’t stop ( ... )

Letting Go (Merlin, Arthur/Merlin, Insecurity, Tops/Bottoms, Overwhelm-ed-ness, BDSM) 4/4 heeroluva May 12 2011, 23:20:10 UTC

“You were so good for me, Arthur. So good. You finally gave it all up, gave it all to me ( ... )

coffeethyme4me May 14 2011, 20:48:46 UTC

Late to the party ( ... )