Comments | hoosierbitch: Fic: Fantasy (NC-17, Chuck, MMOM Day #4)

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Fic: Fantasy (NC-17, Chuck, MMOM Day #4)

May 04, 2011 18:28

Fic: fantasy
Author: hoosierbitch
Rating: NC-17
Fandom: Chuck
Pairing: Sarah/Chuck, Sarah/Bryce, Sarah/Bryce/Chuck
Content Advisory: Fantasized flogging.
Notes: I should really, really be working on my finals. BUT I’M NOT. :D This was written for day #4 of mmom!

Summary: In her dreams, Sarah got to have them both.

( have them both )

writing for: merry month of masturbation, rating: nc-17, fandom: chuck, kink: spanking/whipping, fic, genre: pwp, kink: bdsm

Comments 16

lionessvalenti May 4 2011, 23:38:38 UTC

OH WIN. I LOVE Chuck/Sarah/Bryce and this just hits all the right spots for me. The relationships between them, and the flogging, and all of Sarah's fantasies. This is gorgeous, love.

hoosierbitch June 1 2011, 20:15:36 UTC

Thank you so much! I had a lot of fun writing this one. :D

elrhiarhodan May 4 2011, 23:46:42 UTC

I love this - and if there was anything out there to make me go watch Chuck this would be it, but I fear that I'd be terribly let down.

It's beautiful and sad and wonderful. A tour de force. Thank you, darling. Thank you.

hoosierbitch June 1 2011, 20:16:56 UTC

I really enjoyed the first two seasons of Chuck, but then Bomer moved to White Collar...and so did I. :D

Thank you so much for the feedback! ♥

daria234 May 5 2011, 00:26:02 UTC

This is soooooo good. In every sense.

Things that I love

-All of it
-The line "Bryce was too willing to step back, too willing to take himself out of the equation. Maybe Chuck could teach Bryce some things, too. " Because that right there sums up SO MUCH of who those two characters are and how Chuck, in his own way, is much more self-assured than Bryce.
-All the dynamics between them and how SMART Sarah is about all their relationships and histories, and how she looks at it realistically and unsentimentally and yet somehow finds something hopeful to think about to. LOVE THAT.
-HOTSEXINGS. Also, MFM with toppy!male giving other male instructions instructions? Um. Yeah. Kind of one of my biggest kinks.
-you are a mindreader of some sort because i was just talking to someone (whom you know :) about how Sarah probably wishes Chuck were a lot toppier but kind of still loves the aspects of his personality that make him less fulfilling in bed
-Also: All of it. I already said that but it's still true.

hoosierbitch June 1 2011, 20:17:33 UTC

HEE! Thank you so much, Daria! Your feedback is tops. :D

misura May 5 2011, 06:58:53 UTC

Deliciously hot and I loved Sarah's perspectives on Bryce and Chuck and the differences between them - how Bryce isn't good at expressing himself with words when he's only himself (... no kidding) and how Chuck looks at her as if she's fragile and beautiful, which is a really good feeling even if it sometimes leaves her wanting something a tiny bit less tender and soft and sweet.

hoosierbitch June 1 2011, 20:18:05 UTC

Thank you so much! I had a lot of fun writing these new characters, I'm so glad that it worked for you.

♥ ♥ ♥

rabidchild May 5 2011, 11:55:52 UTC

You've done it to me again. I hate you. *not really*

I think stories about Bryce always wreck me, because of the ultimate tragedy of the outcome, and I can't get it out of my mind. And I can't get enough of them, either.

So hot, this one, and I love the attention to detail with sounds and smells and facial expressions. You're a genius.

hoosierbitch June 1 2011, 20:19:53 UTC

Thank you so much, bb!

I have a head!canon where Bryce and Chuck and Sarah are living happily ever after in a small house on the beach. And Bryce and Sarah are all tan and Chuck is continually sunburnt and they have sex in front of him to distract him from playing WOW and they have tickle fights and all dress up to go see the new Star Trek movies.

...IT IS A V. FLUFFY HEAD!CANON.

♥