completely unfinished (as in barely started) not yet porn
anonymous
September 29 2010, 01:59:09 UTC
This is all I have so far. And it's not porn (YET!), so I'm sorry. But I hope it helps at least a wee bit. Feel better... (SO, SO sorry about your computer
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Elizabeth started to undress him, her small hands delicately unknotting his tie, and working each button loose, pulling the shirt from his pants, spreading her hands against his chest, then down one arm to undo the buttons at his cuff, and then the other. His dress shirt seemed to disappear. Elizabeth tugged off his undershirt, and pulled down his pants, his briefs, his socks and shoes, and then she hugged him again. Elizabeth, with her hands moving like butterflies, stripped him, and he felt all the more naked against the fully dressed warmth of his lovers’ arms. Elizabeth then undressed her husband, this time with direct and deliberate purpose, and Neal smiled
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Ughh, the computer thing sucks, but elrhiarhodan is totally awesome! Also, all of the pain thing sucks (I can commiserate, I am also bleeding as we speak). I'll try to help. I haven't written any porn (or much of anything, to be honest) lately, so here goes, just for you:
Neal held back a whine as he spread his legs wider. He pushed his face deeper into the hot, sweat-dampened pillow, hyper-aware of how exposed his balls were, swaying slightly with every tiny movement.
Peter gently slid the cool, leather paddle across the skin of Neal's hot, sore ass. Neal hissed and bit his lower lip.
"What was that?" Peter asked, pulling the paddle away.
Holy shit, how did he hear that? Neal wondered, biting his lip harder
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Neal held back a whine as he spread his legs wider. He pushed his face deeper into the hot, sweat-dampened pillow, hyper-aware of how exposed his balls were, swaying slightly with every tiny movement.
Peter gently slid the cool, leather paddle across the skin of Neal's hot, sore ass. Neal hissed and bit his lower lip.
"What was that?" Peter asked, pulling the paddle away.
Holy shit, how did he hear that? Neal wondered, biting his lip harder ( ... )
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