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sunriseinspace August 8 2010, 03:52:15 UTC
Wow. This is awesome and visceral and hurts in all the best ways. Good job. :)

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hoosierbitch September 2 2010, 02:45:03 UTC
Thank you!

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melayneseahawk August 8 2010, 03:56:27 UTC
Lovely. Poor broken boys. You'll work it out.

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hoosierbitch September 2 2010, 02:45:19 UTC
Yeah, I think they will. :D

Thank you!

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scarletscarlet August 8 2010, 03:57:25 UTC
Well, hell, that's just lovely. And sad. And I don't know much about background ST canon, I'm afraid, other than what I can remember from the films and tv shows I've seen, but the wee glimpses there are fascinating.

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hoosierbitch September 2 2010, 02:46:26 UTC
Thanks! All I know about show canon (outside of the 2009 movie) I learned from fanon. I'm glad you liked the details, tho! Thanks! :D

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appelwagon August 8 2010, 04:04:47 UTC
oooooooh MY HEART *explodes*

What a beautiful exploration of a budding relationship. It rings so true - the way they kind of cautiously step around each other, testing their limits. And that last line killed it.

Thanks for sharing, this is so lovely.

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hoosierbitch September 2 2010, 02:46:55 UTC
Aw, thank you so much! I really appreciate the lovely feedback, it means a lot!!!

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easilymused1956 August 8 2010, 04:18:35 UTC
A very hopeful story. Very nice how you wove canon into it. Bones just taking Jim's hand at the end seems perfectly natural and right for them.

Great story.

Renee

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hoosierbitch September 2 2010, 02:47:41 UTC
Thank you so much! I'd originally planned hot-sexy-times for the end, but by the time I wrote myself there, all they wanted to do was hold hands.

Oh, boys...

Thank you!

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