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hoosierbitch

FIC: Bad Cop, Good Criminal (1/2)

Jul 25, 2010 00:11

So I've been in a bit of a dry spell the past few days, writing wise, and I thought that I would write some filthy porn to get started up again! :D

Title: Bad Cop, Good Criminal (1/3)
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rating: nc-17, writing for: kink bingo, kink: rough sex, kink: dirtytalk, kink: painplay, pairing: elizabeth/neal/peter, kink: humiliation, porn brings people together, kink: phone sex, kink: orgasm control, kink: pervertibles, fic, fandom: white collar, genre: pwp, kink: bdsm, kink: bondage

Comments 25

misura July 25 2010, 07:11:51 UTC

This was incredibly hot - loved the set-up of the scene, with Elizabeth on the phone, directing things, and Peter being there, describing things to her.

The thing that made this fic from something hot into something incredibly hot though where those small asides, like the joke about giving a con man an inch and having him take over your living room (new curtains? *g*), and of Peter hesitating a few times, consulting with Elizabeth about what to do and whether or not that would be work.

hoosierbitch July 27 2010, 03:42:22 UTC

Thanks, darling! I'm so glad that both the sex and the romance worked so well for you. :D

daria234 July 25 2010, 08:31:19 UTC

This was fabulous - so hot and so good with all the characterizations too. Plus, El topping Peter topping Neal is so good... great fic

hoosierbitch July 27 2010, 03:42:50 UTC

Thanks, Daria! I've been having a lot of fun with toppy!El, lately, glad to know folks are enjoying it! :D

prozacnuts July 25 2010, 09:25:12 UTC

Hi! i made an account cause since i already commented to you last time i might as well. I by chance with a small drop of hope came to your page hoping for an update and what do u kno? U Updated!!! yay!!
Love it i think its really hot that you're adding El into the stories more. i can not wait to read the naughty things peter is going to do to neal with that nightstick. >.< also i was by chancing looking through youtube when i found this and i thought you might enjoy it well any white collar fan would. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Je-xY7x42R4 i swear Matt Bomer is more sensual but Tim Dekay uses his hips a lot more. I feel bad for the poor kid in the middle even he feels the sexual attraction between them and he's stuck in the middle. >.

hoosierbitch July 27 2010, 03:44:14 UTC

Hi, darling! Welcome to the fabulous world of LJ. :D I'm so flattered that you're enjoying my fics so much! Part 2's up now. :D

I LOVE THAT VID! My favorite thing to come out of comic-con thus far. :D

ladygray99 July 25 2010, 13:12:11 UTC

You have the most amazing skill to write unbelievably hot scenes then drop in something like this.

...give them an inch and they’ll redecorate your entire living room.” Peter kind of likes the new curtains, but he’s not going to say anything about that now.

I bow before your skill.

hoosierbitch July 27 2010, 03:45:07 UTC

Aw! *beams*

Thanks, darling! :D

penguingal July 25 2010, 13:52:14 UTC

Holy god. That is so... I may just burst into flames. Fuck.

hoosierbitch July 27 2010, 03:46:02 UTC

WHEE FIRE!

:D :D :D :D :D

Part two's up now - I will maybe think about RPF after I finish part 3. YOU INSPIRE ME.

penguingal July 27 2010, 04:19:54 UTC

Yay part 2! I have already read and squeed! (WHAT? PORN BEFORE BED IS MEDICINAL.)

Also /throws RPF dust your way/

Just for extra inspiration.