This is one of the most amazing stories I've ever read. You so flawlessly meshed the two worlds - what should be two totally separate worlds, yet it was so recognizably White Collar, the storylines, characters and careers. I loved this so much!
I'm glad you could give them a happy ending. That El could be so open and self-assured. That Peter could stop lying and openly be with Neal, give Neal what he so deserves. I wish RL were so lovely. Your writing is phenomenal, as always. This one stole my ♥
I really enjoyed this! You have such a fluid writing style that it was pleasantly easy to lose myself in your story. I appreciated your creative use of cannon and how you fit bits into your universe. I loved "Satchmeaux," LOL. It was heartbreaking, that part when Peter released Neal from his corset and the way he ached from Peter's forced withdrawal was palpable. Thanks for this!
I just found this today through the White Collar Fixation Fest, and... OMG. This is fantastic. I love how you've ingrained the canon situation into this reality, I love Neal as an actor, love Elizabeth's realistic reaction.... there are so many wonderful details! I was surprised to find out that Neal can't read - and yet it made so much sense! This is truly a wonderful piece of art. I love it.
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Thank you, darlin'.
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That corset scene is the one that I am proudest of, in the whole fic. :-)
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This is fantastic. I love how you've ingrained the canon situation into this reality, I love Neal as an actor, love Elizabeth's realistic reaction.... there are so many wonderful details! I was surprised to find out that Neal can't read - and yet it made so much sense! This is truly a wonderful piece of art. I love it.
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I really appreciate the feedback! For some reason, characters having problems reading is a giant kink of mine. O.o
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