FIC: "Soaked," NC-17

[hoosierbitch]

Title: Soaked
Author: hoosierbitch 
Rating: NC-17
Genre and/or Pairing: PWP, Peter/Neal
Warnings: Dirty, wet, messy sex, come!play
Word Count: 2,700
Notes: Written for gyzym , who was having a bad day and wanted wet!Neal and Peter to have sex by a lake. HUGE THANKS to photoash  for the wonderful beta-ing. Any remaining mistakes are my own!
Summary: Neal takes an unnecessary

Comments

[frostfalcon]

very nice! You really get the feelings across nicely. Peter really does have his hands full with Neal.

[hoosierbitch]

It's okay, though - Peter's got big hands...

:-) Thanks for the feedback!

[asimaiyat]

Oh good GOD.

This got all complicated and emotional when I wasn't looking! And it is GORGEOUS. And dirty and hot, obvs, and you know I will never get tired of descriptions of Neal being all helpless and needy and slutty. But also, oh, Peter, there is so much more going on in that big heart of yours than you let on.

[hoosierbitch]

Thanks, babe! I'm glad you'll keep reading slutty/needy!Neal - I can't seem to stop writing him. O.o

And I'm glad you liked Peter the way I wrote him here - I love him so. :-)

[secretsolitaire]

Oof. Peter's fear and Neal's submission are both a little heartbreaking.

[hoosierbitch]

Thanks for your feedback - I'm glad you enjoyed this!

[ursula4x]

BEST blow job ever!

Gah. That was nasty hot and excellent.

[hoosierbitch]

*laughs*

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :-)

[wornoutbirks]

*incoherency is incoherent* aksdjf akldsh v;lajs dfhj

*thud*

my brain...it is melted...deliciously gooey...like fondue.

[hoosierbitch]

*laughs* Mmmm. Braaaaaaaaaaains. Thanks so much for your lovely, lovely feedback! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :-)