FIC: ice ice baby, NC-17

[hoosierbitch]

Okay, I don't really know how I wrote 3k of ice/wax porn, but, uh. I did. This started out as a straight up ice!cube prompt from collarkink , and it, uh. Just kept going...

Title: ice ice baby
Author: hoosierbitch
Rating: NC-17
Genre and/or Pairing: Peter/Neal, PWP
Warnings: Ice!play, wax!play, BDSM, orgasm denial, barebacking.
Word Count: 3,000
Notes:(For interested parties

Comments

[anonymous]

Amazingly hot. You are a porn-with-plot-and-character-development god(dess).

[hoosierbitch]

*preens* Thank you so much, anon! This is just the most wonderful kind of feedback to get - I'm glad it was more than just straight-up-porn to you! (Although I ain't knocking straight-up-porn, it has its rightful place!)

[igoformerlot]

You've outdone yourself. The first three paragraphs of dialog are so... intense. Can't believe Neal didn't get it right--a harbinger of things to come! Somehow his powers of observation seem to be deteriorating when it comes to what Peter is up to.

Still, I love how he's still holding his own here: "Yes," and somehow his voice was still even, like he wasn't sweating, moaning, desperate. Con man."

But then Peter is too much for him, in the end. Delicious.

[hoosierbitch]

Oh, thank you so much! Glad you liked the progression. :-) And the dialogue. :-)

[speccygeekgrrl]

You are the master of kink in this fandom. Every time I see something by you is up I go "oooh, what's she playing with next?"

And you broke Neal this time! And it was incredible! (I can't help but equate Peter going after Neal's prostate with, like, smacking a DVD player that isn't working to make it go. xD)

...I have to say though, mentioning that Neal and Moz have a sexual history together is just teasing the few fans of that pairing, especially coming from someone who writes such smoking hot porn as you. xD How much begging would it take to get you to write them once?

[hoosierbitch]

*laughs*

Oh, thank you so much, darlin'! That is so sweet! I'm glad you're enjoying my work. :-)

Your image of Peter whacking Neal's prostate like a DVD player is SO DEAD-ON HILARIOUS. Oh, man. Perfect.

As for Neal/Moz - I've actually started doodling a small underage!Neal/Moz fic for photoash, but if you're looking for something else (or want a guarantee that I'll write it in a timely manner), I'd like to point you to my auction thread at help_chile, which can be found here! (If money's tight, though, I should let you know that I am very susceptible to bribes, prompts, and kinky suggestions! What would you like me to write...?)

[birddi]

*JAW DROP*

[hoosierbitch]

D'aaaaw. Thanks, yo! :-)

[smokexscribbles]

I'm so impressed with your talent for kink writing. <3

[hoosierbitch]

*laughs* Thank you! Glad you enjoyed the foray into ice!kink. :-)

[secretsolitaire]

JESUS, THIS IS GOOD PORN.

*IS STUCK IN CAPSLOCK*

[hoosierbitch]

*LAUGHS* THANK YOU!