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Jun 05, 2012 16:48

Title:  Blood-Letting
Author:  Emrys
Characters:  Dean, Sam
Genre/Pairing:  H/C, gen
Rating:  PG
Word Count:  1639 
Spoilers: N/A
Warnings: N/A (Not even for language!  I'm shocked!)
Summary: Dean runs into some trouble.  Sam has to come get him.
Disclaimer: Supernatural does not belong to me in any way, shape, or form. It was created by Kripke...not me. It ( Read more... )

&fic, [genre: gen], fainting/collapse, shock

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borgmama1of5 June 5 2012, 21:11:33 UTC
Your presentation of Dean's mindset was truly scary--and I wonder if this didn't happen a few times, the total disconnect while hurt and alone. Scary!

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emrys777 June 6 2012, 21:09:21 UTC
Thanks so much for the kind words! I'm really pleased that you liked it!!!

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yohkobennington June 5 2012, 22:00:22 UTC
I loved this. I kept wondering what was wrong with him and why Sam wasn't near by.

Awesome<3

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emrys777 June 6 2012, 21:10:24 UTC
Yeah, I kind of kept it vague, and I was wondering how people would respond to that vagueness. I'm glad that it worked for you!

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malwinchester June 5 2012, 22:17:00 UTC
I loved the feel of this. Disconnected with perfect characterization. Great job!

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emrys777 June 6 2012, 21:11:20 UTC
Oooh! What a nice compliment!

'perfect characterization'

You made me smile! Thanks!

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maypoles June 5 2012, 23:43:28 UTC
I second the above comment; I also love the feel of this. <3 Lovely fic.

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emrys777 June 6 2012, 21:11:36 UTC
Thank-you so much!

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jesseofthenorth June 6 2012, 00:45:50 UTC
Wow, this was great! Appropriately creepy, good job on Dean's confusion. The ending was kinda perfect too.

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emrys777 June 6 2012, 21:13:42 UTC
I'm glad you liked the ending! The ending was funny, because my intention when I started writing this story had been to add a lot more detail. But then, with the words 'someplace safe' I realized that I had reached my ending without even knowing it! I tacked on the last line about the cabin, and the blood and fire, because it seemed right, but this is the first fic I've ever written that chose it's own ending! Thanks for your comments!

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