That was gorgeous. I do love Nine and Rose up against a wall or in a shower together, and the helplessness of being blinded was a touch that made them both vulnerable and more open to this happening. Really a lovely bit of loving. Made me happy, the tender way they were together.
Yeah, I'm a big fan of "up against a wall" as well. There's something so urgent about it--must have sex NOW, cannot wait to find a bed. But I wanted to convey their tenderness toward each other as well, and I'm glad that worked for you. The blindness broke down a barrier between them that I think would've made things more difficult if they'd been able to see. This way, they felt the need to touch each other more.
Hooray for Nine/Rose hurt/comfort! The opening passages were appropriately vivid and terrifying. Poor Rose! And then there was smut, and it was good. :)
Thanks! The pain itself was bad enough, but the loss of her sight was what made it really terrifying for her, along with it being hard for her to breathe. Fortunately, there was a Nine there to cuddle and comfort and sex her up, which made it all better.
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