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Jan 25, 2009 10:02

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Brown Paper Bag )

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wendymr January 25 2009, 01:16:16 UTC
Oh, I love what you did with the end! Reinforces the few moments of perfect aloneness while they know Real Life's waiting for them outside and they're still (sort of) in the midst of a crisis, albeit one that's calming down.

As always, just lovely :)

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honorh January 25 2009, 03:45:38 UTC
Thanks! You were right about the ending, btw--the story stopped telling itself there, but it didn't feel quite right to me. You helped me work out what I wanted it to say.

As for the moment of aloneness, that was why Rose didn't scream during orgasm. I figured that'd bring the doctors running, and there was only one Doctor who should've been with Rose right then!

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dark_aegis January 25 2009, 01:19:27 UTC
Oh, that was lovely. I really enjoyed that. (But hurt/comfort is definitely one of my 'kinks') Gorgeous work, as always. Thanks for sharing!

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honorh January 25 2009, 03:46:41 UTC
H/c is most definitely one of my kinks, too. Glad you enjoyed it!

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dameruth January 25 2009, 01:44:19 UTC
Oooh, nice one! :D Love the use of touch.

Hm. The first title that caught me when I was reading, trying for the frame of mind where I get my titles, was "Seeing Blind," which isn't quite right (IMO), but I'd probably end up with some kind of play on sight or lack thereof.

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honorh January 25 2009, 03:48:46 UTC
I'm glad you liked that--it was what I was trying to get across. Without sight, touch was the only way they could be sure the other was all right. Which, of course, inevitably ends in sex. As it should.

You've got something there. I'll follow that train of thought and see if this fic will finally tell me its name. *glares at story*

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dameruth January 25 2009, 04:25:58 UTC
Which, of course, inevitably ends in sex. As it should.

Absolutely. ;)

I'll follow that train of thought and see if this fic will finally tell me its name. *glares at story*

I hate those contrary stories -- but sometimes they're the ones that end up finding the best titles of all.

ETA -- and this fic found a good 'un in the end, too; good double meaning!

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lillibetm3 January 25 2009, 02:02:03 UTC
H/C to the max, indeed. Ouch! Poor Nine and poor Rose.
Oh, but at least in the end they found comfort in each other.

As for a title, how about 'Touch Sensitive'? That's the best I can do at this late hour. It's 2.00am here and I really need to go to bed. :)

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honorh January 25 2009, 03:51:05 UTC
Yeah, having something try to eat your skin off can't be fun. Still, with that kind of comfort, who minds some pain?

G'night!

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svanderslice January 25 2009, 03:43:22 UTC
Ooh, I loves me a good hurt/comfort fic, and a smutty one to boot. This is wonderful. Thanks so much for sharing.

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honorh January 25 2009, 03:51:29 UTC
You are quite, quite welcome!

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