Oh, I love what you did with the end! Reinforces the few moments of perfect aloneness while they know Real Life's waiting for them outside and they're still (sort of) in the midst of a crisis, albeit one that's calming down.
Thanks! You were right about the ending, btw--the story stopped telling itself there, but it didn't feel quite right to me. You helped me work out what I wanted it to say.
As for the moment of aloneness, that was why Rose didn't scream during orgasm. I figured that'd bring the doctors running, and there was only one Doctor who should've been with Rose right then!
Hm. The first title that caught me when I was reading, trying for the frame of mind where I get my titles, was "Seeing Blind," which isn't quite right (IMO), but I'd probably end up with some kind of play on sight or lack thereof.
I'm glad you liked that--it was what I was trying to get across. Without sight, touch was the only way they could be sure the other was all right. Which, of course, inevitably ends in sex. As it should.
You've got something there. I'll follow that train of thought and see if this fic will finally tell me its name. *glares at story*
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As always, just lovely :)
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As for the moment of aloneness, that was why Rose didn't scream during orgasm. I figured that'd bring the doctors running, and there was only one Doctor who should've been with Rose right then!
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Hm. The first title that caught me when I was reading, trying for the frame of mind where I get my titles, was "Seeing Blind," which isn't quite right (IMO), but I'd probably end up with some kind of play on sight or lack thereof.
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You've got something there. I'll follow that train of thought and see if this fic will finally tell me its name. *glares at story*
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Absolutely. ;)
I'll follow that train of thought and see if this fic will finally tell me its name. *glares at story*
I hate those contrary stories -- but sometimes they're the ones that end up finding the best titles of all.
ETA -- and this fic found a good 'un in the end, too; good double meaning!
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Oh, but at least in the end they found comfort in each other.
As for a title, how about 'Touch Sensitive'? That's the best I can do at this late hour. It's 2.00am here and I really need to go to bed. :)
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G'night!
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