Comments | honeynoir: fic: tick tock

honeynoir

fic: tick tock

Sep 14, 2011 00:17

Title: Tick Tock
Rating: G-ish/mild PG
Characters: Mels, Amelia, Rory
Wordcount: ~700
Disclaimer: I don’t own Doctor Who.
Summary: ‘She can see the ripples she’s causing.’
A/N: Spoilers up to, and including, LKH.

( more A/N, then fic )

fic, c: amy, c: rory, p: doctor/river, p: amy/rory, fic: doctor who, c: river, c: melody pond

Comments 25

coffee_mill September 15 2011, 18:49:32 UTC

This is simply perfect. Just perfect. I love your style here, it's so raw and simple. Amazing.

honeynoir September 20 2011, 20:04:58 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad the style works!

trialia September 15 2011, 19:20:12 UTC

I love the format in which you wrote this. Lovely.

honeynoir September 20 2011, 20:05:52 UTC

I'm glad it worked! Thank you!

artemis_ephesus September 15 2011, 22:30:45 UTC

Oh, that's really quite something. I was very iffy about the whole idea to start with, of Mels and all, but this fic is making it all make sense a bit more. I love the line about Amy thinking about the Doctor less and less and Mels thinking about him more and more. Gorgeous!

honeynoir September 20 2011, 20:09:38 UTC

I was very iffy about the whole idea to start with, of Mels and all, but this fic is making it all make sense a bit more.
I'm glad! I was iffy too; that's why I wrote this, really.

sahiya September 19 2011, 17:20:22 UTC

Love it. Your Mel is so wonderfully unhinged.

honeynoir September 20 2011, 20:07:15 UTC

Thanks! :)