unexpected fic!

Apr 15, 2012 18:08

Title: Three Aliases the Doctor Used to Get into Stormcage (and One He Didn’t)
Rating: G, pretty much
Characters/pairing: River, Eleven (River/Eleven)
Wordcount: ~3600
Disclaimer: I don’t own Doctor Who.
Summary: What it says on the tin.
A/N: Started this in… October? Clearly, I need to start writing S7 fic now or miss out. This fic was supposed to ( Read more... )

p: eleven/river, fic, fic: doctor who, c: river, c: eleven, p: doctor/river

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eve11 April 15 2012, 17:10:01 UTC
Aw. I love your dialogue, how they're circling the consequences of choices and always oriented a odd angles.

Laughed out loud at the Sontaran remark. The Doctor finds uniforms boring, ha! And "Sun Storm"... lol....

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honeynoir April 19 2012, 19:13:13 UTC
:) Thanks for reading, and I'm so glad the dialogue wasn't terrible! (Heh, if I only could get by writing fic with nothing but dialogue, that'd be super!)

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redjaywrites April 15 2012, 17:38:50 UTC
Always love your River/Doctor fics <3 This one was as good as always, and nicely snappy (:

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honeynoir April 19 2012, 19:15:03 UTC
Yay! Also thank you! \o/

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ladymercury_10 April 16 2012, 01:31:46 UTC
Yay, new fic! I like the part where Rory sends her pie. :)

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honeynoir April 19 2012, 19:16:31 UTC
Yay! Well, he and Amy would have made more than enough. ;)

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badwolfjen April 16 2012, 18:52:32 UTC
Nice job

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honeynoir April 19 2012, 19:17:13 UTC
Thanks for reading!

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jadethe2nd April 16 2012, 20:26:36 UTC
Ohh, this is gorgeous. I love it. Especially the Doctor's "I think we had a row." I've always wondered how they deal with arguments, because if one of them storms off in a huff there's a high probability that the next time they meet the other won't have had that row yet, or will be so far in the future it's insignificant. Must make it a lot more difficult to get closure. So River's "Always" when asked "Are we good?" -- I like that. A lot. Because that's the only answer that makes any sense :)

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honeynoir April 19 2012, 19:26:10 UTC
\o/ Yeah, the more you think about it, the more difficult living somewhat first-to-last gets.

I'm glad the "Always" worked -- River was so insistent asking Ten if they were "good"...

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