fic: the stars slide down (amy, eleven)

[honeynoir]

Title: The stars slide down
Rating: G
Characters/Pairings: Amy, Eleven (hints of Amy/Eleven and Amy/Rory)
Wordcount: ~900
Disclaimer: I don’t own Doctor Who.
Summary: When time stood still, Amy Pond had an office on a train. She came back for her imaginary friend.
A/N: Set during TWoRS. Missing scene(s). Title from Shampain by Marina and the

Comments

[ladymercury_10]

I like it! A very nice moment between them, and in Amy's head as well. :D

[honeynoir]

\o/ I felt so out of touch with Amy's head.

[honeynoir]

Er, by which I mean out of touch with Amy as a character. Awkward sentence is awkward.

[tasty_kate]

I giggled through-out almost the entire thing. Alexander the Great being rude, the Doctor deciding the bow tie was more important than food (and then, "When had she ever turned her back?"-- SO TRUE), Captain Williams "liberating" the Doctor's clothes, Amy's relationship to Cpt. Williams being "boring"... oh, I just loved it all. You got these two down perfectly, including the small details of the Doctor's flaily motions. I encourage you to write more Amy/11, even if not romantic. You do it so well. <3

[honeynoir]

Hee, giggles are fab! :D

I encourage you to write more Amy/11, even if not romantic.
*takes this to heart* I love their dynamic, and encouragement means a lot!

[someplacetobe]

Were where they?
Are these (the first two words) meant to be the other way 'round?

I mention them because I was lost in this wonderfully written moment and that threw me out briefly.

[honeynoir]

Gah, of course! *changes* Thank you so much for pointing that out!

[someplacetobe]

* Thank you so much for pointing that out!
You're welcome; I didn't want anyone else to be thrown out as I temporarily was - I kept wondering if UI'd read it wrong! =P

[promethia_tenk]

<333333 Oh, Amy and Eleventy. I miss them together SO MUCH!! That scene on the train and the bits in the bonus scenes were NOT ENOUGH! This helps, though : )

Love especially the bits about Amy not turning her back (had to have someone point that out to me, but--lol--true!) and her thoughts about why this is her kind of world.

[honeynoir]

Oh, the bonus scenes were lovely! They have such a... idk, chemistry. Also banterrrr.

I wasted like five minutes of the finale thinking about where Amy could have got hold of his clothes and wondering how the Doctor could not notice she didn't actually have to turn. *g* Irrelevant, but = fic.

[a_phoenixdragon]

Beautiful sweetie...what a lovely tag - and so true to Amy! Just gorgeous...

[honeynoir]

Thank you! I'm glad it was true to Amy!