OMG I LOVE YOU!!! ♥ U--- H----- and Y-san are two very different men.
Anyway, to my point--- OMG Erika is fabulous. I love the double-agent aspect, the fact that she keeps them both separate. She is professional and perfect in a nutshell.
And yes, the ultimate experience is exactly as she put it.
i LOVED it!! you were really convincing writing in first person. Erika's character is full of personality and is coming along beautifully.
Your characters are very distinguishable from one another and i like the details you put in how she reads people, how she is two different people, how she gets away with this and that...
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Anyway, to my point--- OMG Erika is fabulous. I love the double-agent aspect, the fact that she keeps them both separate. She is professional and perfect in a nutshell.
And yes, the ultimate experience is exactly as she put it.
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i LOVED it!! you were really convincing writing in first person. Erika's character is full of personality and is coming along beautifully.
Your characters are very distinguishable from one another and i like the details you put in how she reads people, how she is two different people, how she gets away with this and that...
it's brilliant! I can't wait to read more =D
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