Fic: Thinking about What a Friend Had Said, PG, 2/3

[honeylocusttree]

Thinking about What a Friend Had Said 2/?
Warnings: Language
Summary: Follows Hoping for Replacement, WIP. Sam and Dean are reborn into a universe where Sam is the older brother. This has consequences.

Part 1

Comments

[tifaching]

Well, YES for God's sake. You're gonna leave it there?

Love this look at the situation from Dean's perspective. Everything right there, ready to fry his brain if he thinks too hard about it.

Uh, more politely. Please do conintue.

*edited because too and to are not the same thing.*

[honeylocusttree]

There should be more soon--I started on a new scene and got 67 words into it and realized it could go on forever, since I don't know exactly what comes next, so I figured I should post this bit and then work out the next sections. There should only be one more part, maybe two at most (I hope).

It's fun to write, trying to get all these character bits in. Writing two people as four people is kinda complicated! But interesting. I'll try to get the next part out soon, though I can't make any promises.

Thanks for reading! Glad it's got your interest!

[tifaching]

It's definitely got my interest. I love seeing the characters played with like this.

[jennierenee]

TBC? Yes please!!! This is wonderful.

[honeylocusttree]

Hah, thanks! I hope to finish it up with one more part, but only time will tell how that works out. Glad you like it so far!

[honeylocusttree]

I'm no trying to decide which POV to use for the next bit. I started writing it in Dean's before I decided to split them up, and now I don't know. But I guess it depends on how I decide to end it. I almost kinda want to do it from John's POV.

I hope to get the next bit done sooner rather than later...my mantra has always been 'never post WiPs' because I'm so bad about finishing them (well, some of them). So doing it this way after being so careful about it for so long is a bit weird and scary. I hope to finish it though. The key is to not add lots of additional elements to be tied up (*coughAdamcough*) even if I really really want to. So here's hoping! *crosses fingers*

Thanks for reading, glad you're enjoying it!

[ferrous_wheeler]

"TBC?" - really??? This is far too good to leave! I love the grittiness. Feel bad for Sam, so tired, worn out, and looking after his little brother. Hope that you continue!

[honeylocusttree]

Heh, I should probably get on that, huh? I'm starting to get an idea of how things should go fro the next bit, thankfully, so I'm at least moving in the right direction. ;)

Thanks for reading! Glad you enjoyed it!

[honeylocusttree]

The characterizations on these turned out to be more challenging than I thought it would be, going in. I definitely had to concentrate on trying to balance aspects of both original-flavor SamnDean with the new-and-improved(?) versions. But I really wanted them to still have aspects of the characters we've grown to know and love, otherwise it's not as fun.

I really do want to write the next bit, though it looks like it'll be John POV, which is why I've been putting it off. But some parts have been written, so maybe I'll get it together here and bash something out.

Thanks for reading, and sticking with this! I'll see what I can come up with.

[honeylocusttree]

By all means, though I should warn you I post a lot of really irrelevant junk. But I'll try to get something together--you made me wonder about the ending myself, so maybe things'll work out.;)