Memefic: Void; PG

May 28, 2012 22:34


Void
Summary: Short fic for the s7 Finale meme. Prompt: Sam raises Dean from purgatory and drags him to the nearest hospital. Unfortunately Dean's brain filter on monster talk seems to have been left behind in purgatory and he tells the hospital staff exactly how he got in the shape he's in and keeps asking for an angel named Cas.
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antrazi May 29 2012, 11:42:01 UTC
poor Dean. No Castiel, no contact to Sam, temporary blind...
But all will be better, Sammy is there!

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honeylocusttree May 29 2012, 15:29:06 UTC
I've never written blind!Dean before, and have no idea why I decided to do so here. But it seemed to work...

Sam/fixing things is my OTP! (Well, one of them, anyway.) Thanks so much!

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skiing_pelican May 29 2012, 11:58:47 UTC
wow, you managed to show perfectly how broken Dean is. I loved it that he called out for Cas all the time... and all the little hints about how bad it had been in purgatory. Plus Sam saving him in the end... loved it.

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honeylocusttree May 29 2012, 15:30:37 UTC
Aw, thank you. I like the idea of him having an emotional dependence on Cas based around the idea of survival. And needing Sam to rescue him because he's too far gone to think of rescuing himself--tasty! Glad you enjoyed, thanks so much for reading!

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skiing_pelican May 29 2012, 17:34:21 UTC
I love that idea. I wrote a little fic for this meme too, and I also wrote a strong co-dependency into it. I'm happy I'm not the only one who sees it that way.

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4422shini May 29 2012, 14:57:26 UTC
Oooh this is so intense and kind of disturbing. Love it!

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honeylocusttree May 29 2012, 15:31:04 UTC
More than I meant it to be I think, so I'm glad to hear it worked out for you. Thanks so much!

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super_pan May 29 2012, 15:00:07 UTC
This was great. Very bleak, but it draws you in hard. The last line of course is great in how simple it is and how much it conveys.

And of course I love Sam taking care of business.

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honeylocusttree May 29 2012, 15:32:38 UTC
It kind of is all about that last line. And yes, Sam taking care of things because he is AWESOME and CAPABLE is something I wish we'd see more of in fic. I'm making it a mission to write as much of it into my stuff as possible. ;) Thanks so much!

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honeylocusttree May 29 2012, 15:36:23 UTC
There's an imaginary follow-up to this about Sam cataloging all the changes in his brother and all the things he's missing, and looking for evidence that Dean is still Dean. If I make it through my exams I may sit down and write that.

So glad you enjoyed this--it's so bleak and not what people generally look for in a h/c meme. It means a lot that even my brand of weird depressing fic works for some people. ;) Thanks so much!

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