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honestfrank

Tea Over Coffee

Apr 04, 2012 21:33

Title: Tea Over Coffee
Pairing: slight Baekren
Rating: G
Genre: fluff-angst. Still nothing extreme.
Warnings: nothing
Summary: Ren wonders why life doesn't seem to be getting any clearer as he gets older.
Words: 1670

( They sleep together often because Dongho is in his room and for some reason the older boy doesn't like sleeping by himself. Minki decides it's okay because when they sleep together he doesn't dream. )

nu'est, fanfic, baekren

Comments 16

ybaeviplove April 5 2012, 05:59:49 UTC

Beautiful written. :)

honestfrank April 5 2012, 15:58:09 UTC

Thank you. <3

soundsofjewels April 6 2012, 10:24:13 UTC

Once again, you depicted Ren and Baekho's relationship in such a good way. People gush about the skinship, but ignores the detail on why the couple works despite all that. Ren is a fascinating one; I'd love to get through his mind and explore.

Baekho's "Then drink tea instead." such a blunt honesty. Can I say I just love his personality?

You exceeds my expectations ^^

honestfrank April 6 2012, 18:10:35 UTC

Ngh, thank you. I feel that the whys of a relationship are so much more important than the actual events because they make it seem real and natural and understandable.

Baekho and Ren are equally fascinating for completely opposite reasons, which is perhaps why I feel I could write them forever. They play off each other so well. If you have any interest in Ren I'd highly recommend writing him sometime. His mind is like a freaking playground of over-analyzing.

mendicants April 7 2012, 05:37:04 UTC

I love how you wrote Ren and Baekho's contrasting personalities and how they work together. I especially liked the bit about their sleeping arrangement. You captured a really cozy feeling. Great job!

honestfrank April 7 2012, 17:06:23 UTC

They give me so much to work with that it's not difficult to write them. Their personalities just work so well.
Thank you! <3

echomoon137 April 9 2012, 13:59:35 UTC

You're such an amazing author ^^
This is so wonderful

honestfrank April 9 2012, 15:19:11 UTC

Ahh, thank you so much. <3

envybleedsgreen April 12 2012, 02:18:59 UTC

I really like the relationship you put between the two of them. It's not friendship, it's not a sibling relationship, and they're not lovers. But there's always that chance of having more.

honestfrank April 12 2012, 04:45:18 UTC

Oh, thank you for noticing that. Their relationship feels so new to me that I can't picture either of them having confessed or anything, nor can I really picture them even having gone as far as kissing. But there's the potential...oh, is there ever potential. I'm so interested to see how their relationship progresses!

envybleedsgreen April 12 2012, 20:07:07 UTC

Well, NU'EST is still fairly new. I know Ren and Baekho are close, but how close? There is so much potential in their coupling that it makes me grin.