Incomprehensibly Yellow

Apr 03, 2012 23:07

Title: Incomprehensibly Yellow
Pairing: slight Baekren
Rating: G
Genre: fluff-angst. Nothing extreme.
Warnings: nada
Summary: Ren ponders life and colors and whether or not he wants to think about the future.
Words: 1000
A/N: For the sake of the story I'm using real names instead of stage names. Just a forewarning.

Ren is someone that is incredibly ( Read more... )

nu'est, baekren

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soundsofjewels April 4 2012, 07:05:26 UTC
This is really beautiful. I think you've captured a very good image of their personalities. Write more about Nu'est in the future, yeah?

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honestfrank April 4 2012, 18:00:26 UTC
Thank you. I certainly will be writing more as I get to know the boys' personalities; as of right now I can only write from Ren's perspective, and maybe JD's and Baekho's if I tried. Eventually I'd like to feel comfortable writing all five.

Thank you for the comment, it means a lot to me!

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mendicants April 7 2012, 05:41:21 UTC
I know I just left a comment on your other fic, but I couldnt't resist commenting on this one too. I love your take on Ren, but the line that caught my eye was:

Baekho and Dongho are the same person because Dongho doesn't know how to be anyone other than who he is--a happy, pleasant, friendly, touchy sixteen year old who is absolutely one-hundred-percent happy with his life.

because that's just so wonderfully accurate.

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honestfrank April 7 2012, 17:11:58 UTC
And you just alerted me to the fact that I have two 'happy's in that line (which, coincidentally, is also a hundred years long). >.>

I agree, though. Baekho is so forward about who he is, even mentioning how happy he is to get his 'new name' several times...he'd be the one to think that his stage persona is incredibly different, but would be the one with the least differences between his stage character and real life personality.

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echomoon137 April 9 2012, 13:57:09 UTC
Wow this is all sort of amazing and really beautifully written.
I love every bit of it :3

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honestfrank April 9 2012, 15:21:52 UTC
Really, thank you. It means a lot to me to get comments like this when I write something I'm not used to (like Baekren) because I'm always a bit unsure of whether I can manage to convince other people that they're real too. They're just reassuring.

So thank you, my love <3

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envybleedsgreen April 12 2012, 02:15:15 UTC
Wow. I really like this. The struggle of being both you and your persona is very tough, I do believe. You write well.

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honestfrank April 12 2012, 04:47:49 UTC
I think, especially in Ren's case (because he's such a strong personality and so young as well) that trying to live as both has to be difficult. With his family it's Minki. With his fans it's Ren. With his bandmates it's both. I can only imagine how strange that would feel.

Thank you, my love <3 I really appreciate the comments and the compliments.

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envybleedsgreen April 12 2012, 20:09:35 UTC
I agree. There's so many sides of him, and I think he himself is still figuring out what to show and what to hide. I wonder if other idols feel the same, or if they just get used to being another person.

<3 You're welcome! ^^

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honestfrank April 13 2012, 00:15:35 UTC
Yes--like, I know that I read somewhere that he's been trying to smile more because his fans keep telling him he doesn't smile enough. Little things like that tip me off to the fact that it really can't be easy. Can you imagine having people expect so much of you, down to your facial expressions, at 16? It probably gets more normal as you're exposed to it more, but since they just debuted it's got to be pretty overwhelming.

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I need ur permission! ext_1177325 April 24 2012, 13:46:29 UTC
We're BaekRen shippers ^^ This is our house: http://baekrenonly.wordpress.com

I like this fanfic so much. Can I translate it to Vietnamese?

Thank u for reading ^^ Hope ur reply soon :) Love u ^^

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Re: I need ur permission! honestfrank April 24 2012, 14:58:46 UTC
You can, I just ask that you credit me and link to both my livejournal and AFF account in case one link breaks. :3 Both usernames are honestfrank.

Thank you <3

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Re: I need ur permission! ext_1177325 April 24 2012, 23:12:31 UTC
OMG OMG Thank you so much, my dear! *hug* ^^

Love you :">

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