Mysterious Mocha Man and Aiba: A Love Story (Aiba/Nino)

Jan 31, 2012 20:55

title: Mysterious Mocha Man and Aiba: A Love Story
pairing: Aiba/Nino
words: 700
rating: G
summary: Aiba's worked in the coffee shop long enough to have memorized the usual orders of most of their regulars.
notes: This is the third fic I started for this month's round of rainbowfilling XD It is written for the prompt "Frothy milk." Thanks to pinkpapyrus for telling me it ( Read more... )

aiba/nino

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mellastella January 31 2012, 14:43:28 UTC
this was ridiculously cute. it made me really happy to read it. :3♥

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spurious February 1 2012, 10:03:25 UTC
I'm glad you enjoyed it!! :DDD Thank you for commenting~

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elfiepike January 31 2012, 15:08:06 UTC
♥~♥

oh aiba going all sparkly-eyed. oh nino, giving a fake name. XD OH JUN'S ADORABLE EXASPERATION.

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spurious February 1 2012, 10:05:02 UTC
:DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD ♥

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deelovesryo January 31 2012, 21:23:06 UTC
Ooooooh! I want more!
This was really adorable!
Thanks for sharing <3

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spurious February 1 2012, 10:05:22 UTC
Thank you for commenting!! :DDDDDDD

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phrenk January 31 2012, 21:59:09 UTC
So cute! This seems like a universe you could write a lot in, but this fic is sweetly perfect all on its own! I am having sparkly eyes for Aiba and Nino, so many sparkles. ♥

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spurious February 1 2012, 10:06:56 UTC
It was difficult to resist the temptation to write more, I must say~ :D Thank you for commenting!! ♥♥♥

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thoroughlynerdy January 31 2012, 23:12:54 UTC
This was so good and so so cute!

I especially love this line: "Maybe, Aiba thinks, he doesn't want to get to know him because then he won't be Mysterious Mocha Man, and there's something fun about having a crush on a stranger: you don't have to worry about the flaws in their personality if you don't know enough about them to know what those flaws are." Your commentary on crushes is pretty flawless because when we only see one side of a person, we do only see the good and it is easy to become infatuated.

I also love how Aiba called Nino Mysterious Mocha Man because it reminds me of when my friends and I had crushes on boys in high school and gave them code names because we either didn't know their real names, or wanted to talk about them without advertising said crushes. No joke, I liked a guy we called Starburst. It hit my nostalgia bone and I could definitely relate to Aiba's predicament :D

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spurious February 1 2012, 10:09:14 UTC
Haha, my friends and I used numbers as code names for the guys we liked! Like...my friend's crush Sam was called "826" XD I was thinking about stuff like that while I wrote this, so I'm glad it struck a chord with you :D

Thanks so much for the comment!! ♥

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