Gossip Girl Slash ficlet, 'Humphrey' part 2, Chuck Bass/Dan Humphrey Rated: R

[homo_genius]

Title: Humphrey
Author: homo_genius A.K.A. pikapika217 A.K.A. CosmicPudding
Pairing: Chuck/Dan
Rating: R
Summary: Chuck didn’t know what made Dan so alluring not that he really cared what it was. He just knew he had to own it.
Disclaimer: So not mine
Author's note: You guys wanted more, so here it is. If this one goes well, I’ll write a third and final part from

Comments

[theatervine]

There are a few spelling mistakes but it's really good overall. I like the idea of Chuck realizing that he's acutally serious about Dan. Do you have a beta? It'll help with the spelling.

[pikapika217]

I don't actually. have a beta, I mean. Yeah, I'm terrible at spelling XD

[theatervine]

It's okay, you've got a really good writing voice and it'll only get better the more you write. I'd strongly suggest finding a beta, maybe see what authors you like and find out who betas for them.

[homo_genius]

thank you!

[michele659]

This was even hotter than the last chapter! I love the idea of an out of control Chuck,especially over someone he assumed would be his inferior.The scene in the classroom was very sexy,and I could see Chuck trying to get any advantage he could over Dan and teasing him.
I loved the description of the sex between them at Chuck's and how Chuck tried so hard to get Dan out of his system but only managed to do the opposite (Literally as well as figuratively)! Of course Dan would only get better and more addicting the more Chuck was with him! What did he expect?
I really like possessive,obsessive, haunted by Dan Chuck,and am glad Dan put him in his place,instead of the other way around.
Oh,and the part where Dan is licking the whipped cream off his fingers and Chuck grabs him? Loved that!
I look forward to the next part,and seeing what Dan has to say about Chuck,especially since Chuck is calling Dan "mine". I wonder what he'll think when Chuck tells him he's his boyfriend? LOL-I can just picture that!

[megami284]

Oh Yeah! I thought that you wouldn't continue but I'm glad that I was wrong.

I love this! I love how possessive Chuck is with Dan. How he fell hard and fast for him. And how he's willing to fight for his man.

Absolutely delicious!

[oximore]

I loved it :D

The Chuck/Dan pairing just hit me, even if I like the Serena/Dan pairing too :D

[ice_whisper]

Aww. He called him his boyfriend. *is ded*