contest entry #3 - heart knock life

[yuxo]

Title: Heart Knock Life
Rating: PG
Word Count: 7,371
Summary: Changmin just wants to do his roommate a favor and get back home. Yunho just wants to get home as well, but they both meet and end up somewhere unexpected.

Comments

[satoshiice]

shit, that literally sent shivers up my spine =S It was really really good but at the same time kinda bone chilling

[snowinginjune]

this is so awesome! im your number one fan!! i also stalk you!
hahha im kidding darling, but i really do like it ! ^____^ write more!! write more!!
tom hardy icon!

[kawaii_massu]

wahhh.. i've thought about it.. i was sure that Yunho was dead..
but OMG this is so creepy, reminding me of one of supernatural series that i had watched.. <3<3

[kuro_wolf]

The ending was rather short. *pouts*
I kinda knew but then I was hoping I was wrong cos I want HoMin but sigh, that wud defeat the purpose of the story. Which was very good! I gotta say, your creative mind astounds me and your writing is *wow*~
You were gone a long while and then you comeback with 3 awesome HoMins~ I am happy~

[chi_chun]

no! why Jae, why did it have to be him?? I wanted HoMin =(
to the person who wrote this, you had me holding my breath =)