Down the Rabbit Hole, Chapter Seventeen

May 23, 2008 15:44

You're right, I suppose it's bad form to take a 4 month break. Sorry.
Anyone still reading might know that at the end of the previous chapter, Simon did something unexpected. Here's why.

Not beta'd, please point out glaring errors. Thanks.

Down the Rabbit Hole, Chapter Seventeen )

dtrh

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darkhorse422 May 23 2008, 21:58:31 UTC
You posted! I love the reason why he did something unexpected. Wonderful as always Homespun, and I'm happily looking forward to more!

Thanks

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homespunfic May 24 2008, 00:51:32 UTC
Thank you for reading. I know I've been a very, very bad author, so thanks for commenting. Hope to present more before... August?

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menyhapyreturns May 24 2008, 00:07:53 UTC

“I am hijacking the ship," Simon explained patiently

I LOL'd!

Thanks for posting!

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homespunfic May 24 2008, 00:52:46 UTC
Yay, I love an LOL! *gives self gold star*
Thank you for commenting.

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kit_the_brave May 24 2008, 00:26:04 UTC
Holy cow, that was mile-a-minute action! And now Simon is hijacking the ship! I loved Jayne. Something about his scale of dead-lookingness cracked me up, even as I appreciated how concerned he was for Mal.

Yay, update!

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homespunfic May 24 2008, 00:55:52 UTC
Oh Kit, thank you. :D
I'm glad you loved Jayne, I had fun with him. And hope the action didn't wear you out. I had to make up for all those chapters of noooooothing happening.

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terimaru May 24 2008, 02:03:26 UTC
*SQUEE!!* You sneaky thing, you! You didn't tell me you were even writing.

The homesteader was still placidly deceased.

Hee! This has got to be the best line evah. :D

I'm so glad Simon has turned his brain on - this was great. Mal might live to fight another day, yet. :)

*hugs and applause*

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homespunfic May 29 2008, 13:08:18 UTC
Yay! Look, almost takes me as long to reply as to write a new chapter. And believe me, I didn't know I was going to write until I did. Ya know? This chapter has been killing me, I thought it was so boring. But then I was inspired by you two and your productivity.
I'm glad you liked that line, it amused me.
*hugs* Thanks for your support as always!

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browncoat_2x2 May 24 2008, 02:40:35 UTC
You posted!!!!!!! :DDDD

I love the way Simon's at the point where hijacking the ship doesn't even make him bat an eye, too funny :oD I can absolutely see him reaching a point like that :oD

Soooo so wonderful to see a part from you darlin'!! Can't wait to find out if Simon's plan works or not!! And how the hijacking will go! :oD

Hoooray! :D

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homespunfic May 29 2008, 13:11:06 UTC
I DID! AS I told terimaru, you all inspired (shamed) me.
And yeah, I think by that point Simon is "bring on the dancing elephants with Callahan full bore autolock, whatever." Now I have to think of what happens next.

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