Comments | homespunfic: Sir

homespunfic

Sir

Feb 21, 2006 23:10

Hmm, good thing I have this LJ, I use it so often.
Thanks to Daisy at BNF Management, and Hez, my corporal. Apologies cause I know the handful of you are seeing this posted twice. (And Feylin doesn't like stories about war. I know, I owe you a tortoise bodice-ripper.)

Early Mal and Zoe, wartime. Zoe's POV.

( Sir )

mal and zoe, zoe, mal

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janissa11 February 22 2006, 05:20:53 UTC

Well, I flat-out adore this. Wonderful work start to finish. Kudos!

homespunfic February 23 2006, 13:55:13 UTC

Flat-out? Cool! That's very heartwarming praise. Thanks for leaving a note, glad you liked it.

jaegamer February 22 2006, 05:32:40 UTC

Very nice! Good Zoe voice.

homespunfic February 23 2006, 13:55:48 UTC

Thanks! Zoe was being very cooperative.

honorh February 22 2006, 05:40:21 UTC

I love this early exploration of Mal and Zoe. It really shows how they could've become so tight, and why she's so loyal to him. Why so many people are so loyal to Mal, really. Excellent work.

homespunfic February 23 2006, 13:57:15 UTC

Thank you. You know what happens when you start mulling over that question of how Mal commands so much loyalty: fic!

spikeyboots February 22 2006, 08:15:49 UTC

Really great Mal & Zoe voice. I loved how you paint the war, and the way Zoe sees Mal.

homespunfic February 23 2006, 13:58:06 UTC

Thanks! I really enjoy writing Mal and Zoe conversations, and it intrigues me, what Zoe must have thought of Mal early on.

sagey1899 February 22 2006, 12:04:38 UTC

great job! There is so much between them over the years it's really nice to have a wee look at that past.

I hope you do more of their past. :)

homespunfic February 23 2006, 13:59:04 UTC

Aw, thanks. There sure is a whole lot of history there to explore...