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[veils]

title: And I am never broken.
rating: Um, between PG-13 and R. For...implications.
notes: I don't like it. And the more I read it, the less I like it, so I thought I'd post it before I deleted it all.

He put her hand in his, once.

“They’re small.”

“But they are my own.”

And then she was misquoting a song.

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They were often quiet together

Comments

[miri_d]

liawuejrf;weijr I love you.

Marry me?

XD, Deja vu.

Generally I hate RPF (yes, I know, I'm a hypocrite for being a member of this comm., but I love it :P), but this made me giggle because it's so like them. And it's hot. I mean, Gillian giggling at random, inappropriate moments = trufax.

[veils]

lol RPF is much too addictive for me to hate.

[tendre_posion]

*insert massive keymash* ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥
that was trufax awesome.
i♥u

[veils]

hee, ty. ♥♥

[elapses]

You know, I can sort of see why you didn't like this, because for the first bit it's sort of wonky and hard to get into and I can't tell you exactly why, but I can tell you where it suddenly becomes brilliant:

Fight the Future set.

“They kept the outtakes.”

She laughed and wondered which ones he meant.It srsly just gets better and better after that

[veils]

YYY, it's like, I like the first part, but then I think it trufax sucks for a while.

LOL ILU TOO AND OUR COMM.

LOL YYY, AND NOT THE X-FILES KIND.

[ex_chaosity]

LOL HELLO. I READ THIS, YYY.

I AGREE WITH elapses ON THE WONKY THING, ONLY THE SECOND ONE ABOVE THE FIGHT THE FUTURE BIT IS ONE OF MY FAVOURITES:

She was familiar.

(Ten years later and she didn’t fade.)

And I'm going to turn capslock off now.

They didn’t need words, because they both knew what they were talking about.

I also love that. It's like their own little language, in their own little world.

But I like the way you did this. It's like snapshots of their relationship, and the things that change, and the things that stay the same. I'm annoyed at myself because I can't think of what else to say, or even how to make this a proper review. But my butt hurts from sitting in this position so long, and my brain is all "OMGZ HOUSE/CUDDY" and also, my teeth are sticky with honeycomb. Excuses, excuses.

But you did a good job, Sam, particularly as the fic progressed. The last line is perfect. Made me die a little bit.

Basically, what I mean is:

JHDSKJGHFKDJHFKJSHKJ IL THIS. ILU. IL XF. EVEN THOUGH I HAVE NEVER WATCHED IT. LOL SKILL.

♥

[greenovalfruit]

0.0

ANGST YOU TERRIBLE BITCH ANGST!!!!!

But I liked that one. Because now fuck, I have to go watch the end of Milagro so I can hear!!!! Srsly omg.

I forget that she was married so recently.

P.S. Felix, y/y? What do you reckon? We need baby pictures so we can decide who the father is.