because i love you

Jun 08, 2010 19:25


so.... after this week i'm going to be gone for about a month.... maybe more. and in that month i won't be able to write or do anything, so! i've decided ((since i love you)) that i'm going to post two chapters from Hello. i know i was saying all that stuff about "x number of comments or RAWR D:< *nomnomnom*" but... honestly my self esteem hits the ( Read more... )

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holystardown June 8 2010, 23:27:42 UTC
spot for moon1084 <3

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moon1084 June 15 2010, 02:14:59 UTC
omg i am late but i am here now.

Okay so can i just so that this fic is totally giving me chills and i do mean the good kind.

i love it already.

Though, you need to tell me right now if this is a sad ending fic cuz i refuse to read it.

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holystardown June 15 2010, 03:14:49 UTC
Better late than never bb ;] I am SO glad that you like it so far <3

sending you a message btw
PeAcE

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holystardown June 8 2010, 23:28:05 UTC
spot for winkystars <3

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winkystars January 12 2011, 22:18:00 UTC
:DDDD THIS IS SUCH AN AWESOME FIC!!! And it's only the 1st chapter but omg! I'm in love with it already!!! <3 <3 <3

I've never read a psychological DBSK fic before so it's refreshing to me :) although, I have read a SHINee one before since my friend forced me to xD (it was REALLY good by the way O_o) but anyways~ I can just say... well. This is going to be one of my favourites ;)

Ahh~ Yunho so... professional :'D haha~ I can totally imagine him at this job, y'know? Him waking up late surprised me there xD He should get a much more reliable alarm (like Jaejoong's kiss! *bricked*)

O3O Jaejoong is so cute! Despite the fact that he hears voices, he is still so... so... pwetty :3 (I know Yunho agrees)

Hm.. I wonder if the other TVXQ members would make an appearanace... Well. I better read the next chapter to find out xD I love the names of the voices by the way :) hehe.
And I'm just taking a wild guess - But I'm thinking the name of the fourth voice is U-know? xD I don't know... I'll just read!

Hehe~ Can't wait >_< (love your writing ( ... )

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winkystars January 12 2011, 22:23:59 UTC
I just realised I'm an idiot xD

I forgot to comment about Changmin and Heechul! D:

Well... To me, Changmin seems like a pretty cool guy... Maybe a little... I don't know. Random? xD

OHOHOH! I have another comment to make about the voices! I bet Max tells Jaejoong to pig out on food >:D Xiah probably tells him to sing in school assembly and Micky.. Hmm.. he's probably the one telling Jaejoong to do all the bad stuff O_o (sorry, your LFW Yoochun has tainted my innocent image of Yoochun xD not saying it's a bad thing - I just won't be able to think of Yoochun the same-way again..)

And to Heechul! :D

O_o It's probably just me but I'm getting the feeling that Heechul thinks Jaejoong's a girl? xD or maybe he knows Jae is a guy and just called him babe? haha... AND OHMYGOSHHOWCOULDYOUDOTHISTOME?!?!?! DX Why is Hangeng not real?! You're killing one of my SuJu OTP's :'( This is turning a tad depressing T-T I could only hope that EunHae doesn't get thrown into a tragedy (if you put them in, that is)

ARGH! HWAITING! O3O

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holystardown January 12 2011, 23:57:04 UTC
Lmao. Innocent yoouchun. Please ;]

The voices tell him a variety of things actually, most of which I don't really go into specifics about and quite a few uncharacteristic things. This fic is horribly planned out OTL

in my mind, heechul calls everyone babe or man or something like that lol. Heechul > the world xD

Oh lordy... If you think this chapter is depressing.... Grab your tissue box bb. Just sayin. Um, eunhae are... Minor? In the most minor way possible really, and not together *shot* I wrote hae's part before I started shipping eunhae and one of my friends put hyukkie with... Well you'll see

I missed you comments so much <3 they make my inbox explode and I love it <333
PeAcE

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holystardown June 8 2010, 23:28:18 UTC
spot for reya <3

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captainmarvel June 8 2010, 23:43:53 UTC
WOW!

This was AWESOME!!! I really like how this is written. Though my english Professors have always said we can't trust a first-person narration, I like experiencing this through Yunho's perspective.

This is a very interesting plot. Please update soon!

Thank you ♥

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holystardown June 8 2010, 23:52:58 UTC
haha, the one i had this year kept telling us that too :] personally, i think writing in first person is so much more fun though. it's easier to REALLY get into your characters :3
next chapter will be up momentarily :D
thank you so much for reading and commenting <3
PeAcE

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holystardown June 9 2010, 00:51:03 UTC
next chapter is already up ^^

i know exactly what you mean, mental disorders have always fascinated me too, but sadly i have yet to take a psychology class... i hope to do so soon though :D

thank you so much for reading and commenting <3
PeAcE

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