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loveslipped June 17 2009, 09:41:23 UTC
SQUIB. I am like so proud of you for making this word up Jessica xD

You know I love the fact that Taemin is Heechul's younger brother. So fitting and perfect. Baby!Taemin with Heechul kind of throwing a fit was amusing.

Everyone in Heechul's family is so nonchalant about the wall being blown out. But I guess it's the norm when you're in a wizard family. His mother cracked me up xD

You did research on owls didn't you? Cause I know you didn't just make-up the owl that came in and gave Taemin his letter to Jae Neung.

I DISLIKE IMAE ALREADY. BRATTY GIRL. i'm wondering though if she's related to kyu?

I like that the Kims are a classy family *nods*

Heechul continued to rant, “That’s how she’s getting to you! You can’t do this to me, you filthy little traitor! Aren’t you supposed to be a Validus? Whatever happened to loyalty, what about being a good friend-oh no wait, that’s the Decori, isn’t it. You realize your names are one letter away from each other? That’s practically illegal, you pervert-“*DIES* so hilarious and genuis. only ( ... )

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holykeebler216 June 17 2009, 09:55:07 UTC
XD bri bb...i didnt make it up. its a legit HP word. lols ilusm ♥

LOL well Heechul's mom is kind of crazy in a 'i never would have pegged you for a psychopath' way. and yes, i looked up owls on wikipedia XD leave me alone.

LOL YOU SHALL NEVER KNOW IF THEY'RE RELATED. uuuuntil next chapter. and heechul will do anything to get siwon away from his arch nemesis. including removing his fingernails.

THEY ARE SO BFF AMIRITE? iltsm. lol ojongkey those kids that youre happy that are here, because theyre fun, but then you also kind of wish they would go bother someone else ahha.

lol they are legit het. sorry to burst your bubble, bb |D most people in this fic are, for the most part, het.

DUDE i dont know the age order like schm0use, so i totally had siwon their age and then i was like...oh dammit hes SO FAR DOWN. so i squished him up a year :/

lol im glad. i was like...maybe im getting too carried away with the magic shit. XD you know how i get like that. SOON. im writing while im waiting for ticket sales. ugh. one more hour.

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loveslipped June 17 2009, 10:05:54 UTC
/bricked i was never super into HP :P

haha its good to do research when you write. i remember reading that somewhere on like advice for writers.

so that means there's a possibility that imae and kyu are releated.

the three of them are so fail-y together. their bickering is cute and annoying at the same time.

siwon being a year older is perfect cause he acts way mature. i mean he looks older than hyuk and hae and he's the same age as them.

i hope you get tickets! can't wait to read kangin and herbology xD

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holykeebler216 June 17 2009, 10:31:14 UTC
lol its fine, its cute ^^

i totally looked up "awesome asian reptiles" when looking for Hannie's snake. okay, so i cut out the "awesome" part in the search, but i found something badass anyway.

:|

he seriously looks older. i keep forgetting :/

lol he fails so hard, i luv it. i hope so too @___@

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followurdestiny June 17 2009, 10:52:54 UTC
This is so entertaining...
Heechul being Heechul.. Taemin being his almost 'squib' brother... and meeting everyone from Shinee ...
Geng easy-going attitude...
Siwon hooking up with Heechul's arch rival... poor Siwon...
♥ing this! Can't wait for the next chapter!

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holykeebler216 June 17 2009, 11:18:31 UTC
thank you!! im glad you read! :DD
except now im sad because i missed out on suju tickets for the SECOND FREAKING TIME and now i have to stand in line overnight. fml.

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followurdestiny June 17 2009, 18:17:10 UTC
ohh.. your going to their concert! Good luck with buying the tickets! You will succeed this time! Third time's a charm...

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holykeebler216 June 17 2009, 18:24:45 UTC
thanks! i hope!

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animegirl29 June 17 2009, 11:45:18 UTC
O.M.F.G THIS ♥

NO THIS CALLS FOR MORE EDITS!!

♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

...did I mention ♥? 8D

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holykeebler216 June 17 2009, 11:46:02 UTC
omfg you :D

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animegirl29 June 17 2009, 11:47:50 UTC
And the fic is long too!! :D

♥♥♥♥♥♥

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holykeebler216 June 17 2009, 11:51:33 UTC
impossibly long, yes.
lol if people like the long thing so much, i guess ill just post them in huge ginormous 10k word chunks XD

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panda3035 June 17 2009, 14:17:25 UTC
LOL!!!!omg, i love the ending! siwon!! you should have known the consequence will be bad! and yay that taemin finally got power!

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holykeebler216 June 17 2009, 18:22:56 UTC
thanks so much for reading! :D

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holykeebler216 June 17 2009, 18:23:28 UTC
8D chapter 2, coming right up!

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