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Super Junior (AU); The Difference Between Pawns and Kings; [2/__ ]

Jan 23, 2009 19:46

Title: The Difference Between Pawns and Kings [2/__ ]
Fandom: Super Junior (cameos by Epik High, Dong Bang Shin Ki, etc.)Chapter Pairings: KyuMin, Eunhae ( Read more... )

character: shindong, character: sungmin, pairing: eunhae, character: donghae, dbpk, character: kibum, character: kyuhyun, pairing: kyumin, genre: au, character: eunhyuk, fandom: super junior

Comments 26

schm0use January 24 2009, 01:58:08 UTC

SPOT.

schm0use January 24 2009, 05:18:31 UTC

....KYUHYUN'S PART WAS SO EPICALLY GOOD.

you and those fucking last lines, dammit.

the kyumin understanding was osm. <3

(seriously though the last line of that part was so good)

ummm..... i still can't figure out what happens to hyukjae. *glare*

get to it.

WRITE ME A DANCE SCENE BISH.

holykeebler216 January 24 2009, 05:21:23 UTC

lol was it? i was actually kinda unhappy with it.
i was like
OMFG IM WRITING SO SWIRLY AND FLOWERY AND JUST CUT THE SHIT AND GET TO THE POINT omg.

lol last lines. i love them. next chapter is choc full of them.
...i really need to stop that.

8D hyuk mystery. you will never know.
...actually its probably in chapter 4, if not chapter 5.

NO FUCK YOU YOU KNOW I WOULD JUST BOTCH IT.

holykeebler216 February 12 2009, 16:39:13 UTC

YAH.

BIWEEKLY IS TECHNICALLY REFERRING TO EVERY TWO WEEKS, BUT IT IS THE COLLOQUIAL USAGE AS TWICE A WEEK TOO.

BUT IT IS TECHNICALLY EVERY TWO WEEKS. I WAS RIGHT >:T

iamahim January 24 2009, 05:08:39 UTC

mah~ too good ^×^
ive prolly said this before... but i absolutely love the way you write ♥
those first few paragraphs had me hooked
im lovin this au that youve set up

gah! xp now to wait for next update >_<

btw was that really asprin hyukie took O_ó *suspicious* ^^

holykeebler216 January 24 2009, 05:18:49 UTC

ahh thank you! aha i try to hook people but i dont know if it works or not |D

this is my first real attempt at an au, im really glad you like it
i hope the next update explains a little bit more about chapter 1... >.> i kinda left it on a bad note

lol id love to hear theories about hyuk
you never know if you may be right ;D

fadedandinsane January 24 2009, 05:16:19 UTC

SPOT SPOT SPOT!!

holykeebler216 January 24 2009, 05:17:13 UTC

ugh dont read this piece of trash

fadedandinsane January 25 2009, 05:41:19 UTC

effed up internet connection.
but i'm reading it XDD

NO MATTER WHAT YOU SAY!!!

fadedandinsane January 26 2009, 01:06:27 UTC

sooo besides failed internet, i also got kidnapped by my best friend and her boyfriend. she just turned 21. *cough...

*skippps offf to reeeaaaaddd & comment at the same time cuz she's cool like that. yesh.
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OHHHHHMAIIIIGAWWWDDDD! KYUUUUUMINNNNN!!!!*is shocked speechless by the intensity of it... (he's not sleeping alone, and yet i get the feeling there is no smut XDD). EXCUSE ME WHILE I FIX MYZ EXPLODED BRAINZ.

*reads more
OMFG!!! TUKUTZ!!!MENTION YOU GET A ZILLION POINTS MY LOVE!!
...
kibummie's a CLUB OWNER?
shindongie's A TALENT SCOUT!!

*reads moar
YUNHO!!!!! EUNHYUKKIE!! EUNHAE!!! HINTED!PAST!KIHAE!!! *hyukkie's sick o-o?

*reads mooooaaarrr
HE'S POPPIN PILLS!!! HYUKKIE'S POPPIN PILLS?
asprin my foot

I LIKE THIS. MUCH. YES. VERY. LIKE. LOVE!!!

♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

Thread 14

korichan January 24 2009, 06:25:54 UTC

chapter 3 gets a lot more depressing though WTH woman did you all ready forget about Chapter 1? Haha, this whole story is depressing, I made it a point to comment about that before I start on this chapter. xD ( ... )

anazergal January 27 2009, 05:52:07 UTC

Hyuk's not taking steroids or drugs or anything like that, right?

Sungmin sleeping over mmhmm. And it's that simple, riiight~~

Poor Kyu.

holykeebler216 January 27 2009, 07:06:02 UTC

iono i cant tell you :D

and lol the kyumin sleepover is not like that...desssspite all of my other smut writings >.>

yes, poor kyuface.